What is the most important animal in your country? Why is the animal important? Use reasons and specific details to explain your answers
Animals have always been important for humans all over the globe. Depending on each culture, animals are valued for different reasons such as being a reliable source of food, they might represent a sacred being or just as pets. One of the most significant animals in my country is the cow, because it is an essential provider of food. I will explain my reasons in detail, in the following essay.
To begin with, most of the people who live at countryside owe at least one cow. This is a tradition of hundreds of years, and is still persisting among villagers. It is almost inconceivable to live in a village, and not to take care of one cow. This is because, Romanian citizens consume a lot milk-based products, such as various types of cheese, milk, butter, cream and so forth. Moreover, cows give meat as well, because every year a new veal is born, and after a few months it is sacrificed for food. Furthermore, it is not difficult to grow a cow, because the environment has forests and grasses, and therefore the costs are minimal, and the benefits are huge. I know all these details because I was raised at countryside. Back in my childhood, I used to drink milk every morning, for breakfast. I had this habit until the age of 19, when I moved out.
To continue with, cows are a source of money too, because villagers can sell their products in special places. On the one hand, there are those who have farms and sell a great amount of products. On the other hand, even those who do not have farms, but one or two cows, can make good money from trading their home made products. This is because even town dwellers are very fond of home-made products, as they prefer eating organic foods. In addition to being organic, these products have no extra chemicals, and thereby are healthier. My grandmother's activity is a compelling example of this. Every Sunday she used to hire a special place where rural products were sold, and in a few hours all the products were gone. She has been doing this for over forty years, and she has her faithful clients.
Third, people use cow’s skin in order to make carpets and they became pretty fashionable today. They are easy to wash and are proper for almost every type of room. I have seen those carpets in big retails, such as Ikea, and they were pretty expensive.
To summarize, cow is the most quintessential animal in my country, because it is widespread source of food and money.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, if, moreover, so, still, therefore, third, well, as for, at least, in addition, such as, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 31.0 15.1003584229 205% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 13.8261648746 130% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 39.0 43.0788530466 91% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 52.1666666667 98% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2006.0 1977.66487455 101% => OK
No of words: 436.0 407.700716846 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.60091743119 4.8611393121 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.56953094068 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50100981205 2.67179642975 94% => OK
Unique words: 236.0 212.727598566 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.54128440367 0.524837075471 103% => OK
syllable_count: 633.6 618.680645161 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 9.59856630824 156% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 3.51792114695 199% => OK
Conjunction: 10.0 1.86738351254 536% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.6003584229 121% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.2648046417 48.9658058833 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.24 100.406767564 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.44 20.6045352989 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.56 5.45110844103 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.107624944206 0.236089414692 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0311139404919 0.076458572812 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0502424199467 0.0737576698707 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0791059139625 0.150856017488 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0871635759971 0.0645574589148 135% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.0 11.7677419355 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 58.1214874552 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.1 10.9000537634 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.52 8.01818996416 94% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 86.8835125448 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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