nowadays more and more people want to live themselves.what are the reasons? is it a positive trend or negative trend.
In recent times, people prefer to stay independently rather than staying with parents. There are many reasons for this trend. However, being independent of others and living separately is more advantageous to society. The essay describes both the pros and cons of the statement and concludes supporting later statement.
Firstly, traditional way of inheriting family business is decreasing as people become literates and try to do job which may demand to leave their parents. Thus, they have to stay alone far away from their parents to fulfil various jobs and reach their dream roles. On the whole , this would help to development of the society and country.
Secondly, the notion why there is increase in count of people preferring to stay independent is available of plenty resources when compared to the past times. Anywhere in the world, there are imports and exports which transfer goods of home country to other countries because of the migration of people to various places in the country and across the world. Thus the financial status and foreign relationship also gets effected with this.
In contrast, staying apart from each other will lessen the relationships among the family members. Although there are many advantages of being independent for both individual and society, the family sentiments are getting effected because of staying apart and not spending sufficient time with parents in their busy day and separated by long distances.
To conclude, people desire to stay themselves is growing because of the resources availability and for their career dispersed across the different places but at the cost of loosing family members>
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, thus, apart from, in contrast, on the whole
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1399.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 264.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.29924242424 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03089032464 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67151688971 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.594696969697 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 424.8 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.6997418051 49.4020404114 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.615384615 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3076923077 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.46153846154 7.06120827912 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 16.0 5.01903807615 319% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0859702378342 0.244688304435 35% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0374774217591 0.084324248473 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0591835064241 0.0667982634062 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0494237547942 0.151304729494 33% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0603230970673 0.056905535591 106% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.46 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.99 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.