Some people think that animal testing is fruitful to human beings while others are against this view point. Discuss both the views and give your opinion.
Animals are beautiful creation of God on the earth. Some people assert that animal testing is lucrative for uplifting health standards.On the other hand, others advocate that testing on animals is unjustifiable. Here, I would like to accord for both the views by my own preception.
There are manifold points to endorse former view. First and Foremost, animal testing is beneficial to accumulate great deal of knowledge. To demonstrate, medical students perform experiments on animals in order to develop operation skills. Adding to it, testing of new drugs can be done on animals to find out the side effects. As a result, working on animal is beneficial for medical students. What is more, animal testing have tendency to increase number of job opportunities in veterniary field and it leads to decrease in unemployment. On the contrary, others have conflicting views.
Numerous points are here to shore up the latter view. To commence with, animals have to tolerate unbearable pain during testing. To elaborate, its cruelty on animals which is unjustifiable. Furthermore, animals sometimes died during testing. Consequently, number of animals are on decline at an alarming rate.
In my notion, both views have their own significance. Undeniably, testing on animals gives a lot of benefit to humans. However, testing on animal is also unjustifiable. Therefore, Government should take some steps to stop this. Testing on animals should be banned and it should be done on old animals or on nefroius criminals and terrorists.
To recapitulate, there is no doubt, that testing on animals for humans play an important role but I personally believe is that testing on animals leads to their death and it should be banned. It is well said that nature without animals is like soup without salt, so animals should kept safe.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, furthermore, however, if, so, therefore, well, no doubt, as a result, on the contrary, what is more, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 7.0 271% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 1.00243902439 698% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 5.60731707317 321% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 54.0 33.7804878049 160% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.97073170732 176% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1535.0 965.302439024 159% => OK
No of words: 295.0 196.424390244 150% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.20338983051 4.92477711251 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14434120667 3.73543355544 111% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91427654082 2.65546596893 110% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 106.607317073 154% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.55593220339 0.547539520022 102% => OK
syllable_count: 489.6 283.868780488 172% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.45097560976 117% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 4.33902439024 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 3.36585365854 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 8.94146341463 246% => Too many sentences.
Sentence length: 13.0 22.4926829268 58% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.3840962245 43.030603864 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 69.7727272727 112.824112599 62% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.4090909091 22.9334400587 58% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 6.81818181818 5.23603664747 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 3.70975609756 270% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 1.13902439024 702% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.267950044752 0.215688989381 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0802508974818 0.103423049105 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0687137525103 0.0843802449381 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.166506514882 0.15604864568 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0499424781917 0.0819641961636 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 13.2329268293 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 49.82 61.2550243902 81% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.29 11.4140731707 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.14 8.06136585366 101% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 40.7170731707 177% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 11.4329268293 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.9970731707 65% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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