You live in a room in college which you share with another student. However, there are many problems with this arrangement and you find it very difficult to work. Write a letter to the accommodation officer at the college. In the letter,
• describe the situation
• explain your problems and why it is difficult to work
• say what kind of accommodation you would prefer
Dear Sir or Madam,
I writing this letter to inform you about the issues I am facing with the current arrangement of accommodation at students’ hostel.
I have been allocated a shared room in Pristine Hostel, with a fellow student like everybody else in this facility. But, it has been extremely tough to adjust with my current roommate because not only he invites his lot of friend to hang out but he prefer to listen to very loud music. Even after informing him about the inconvenience, he always choose to neglect it and again continue to follow the same routine.
The current semester exams are coming up, which means I need at least three peaceful hours to study. If it was not about the examination, I would have try to adjust. When I confronted him about the music problem, he almost got physical. Now it is water over the head for me.
I would really appreciate if you could arrange some other stay where I can concentrate on my studies rather than indulging myself in regular quarrels. A separate room with family or in apartment would really suits my need in case it is available near to college campus.
I look forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours Faithfully,
Sandip Ramani
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 19, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sir or Madam, I writing this letter to inform you abou...
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Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: I_AM[1]
Message: Did you mean 'I am'?
Suggestion: I am
Dear Sir or Madam, I writing this letter to inform you about...
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Line 5, column 250, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'prefers'.
Suggestion: prefers
...es his lot of friend to hang out but he prefer to listen to very loud music. Even afte...
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Line 5, column 347, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[3]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'chooses'.
Suggestion: chooses
... him about the inconvenience, he always choose to neglect it and again continue to fol...
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Line 7, column 152, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'tried'.
Suggestion: tried
...not about the examination, I would have try to adjust. When I confronted him about ...
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Line 13, column 18, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ring from you soon. Yours Faithfully, Sandip Ramani
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, look, really, so, at least
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 32.9175257732 97% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 26.3917525773 133% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1005.0 937.175257732 107% => OK
No of words: 211.0 206.0 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.76303317536 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81127787577 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61527220478 2.54303337028 103% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 127.690721649 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.691943127962 0.622605031667 111% => OK
syllable_count: 316.8 290.88556701 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.7680446459 44.8134815571 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.75 76.5299724578 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5833333333 16.8248392259 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.91666666667 4.34317383033 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 2.54639175258 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.248553883906 0.216113520407 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0721616012613 0.0766984524023 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0872755899704 0.0603063233224 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.144250537988 0.12726935374 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.107959734383 0.0580467560999 186% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 8.37731958763 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 70.7449484536 89% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.03 8.71597938144 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.85 7.59969072165 103% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 41.2886597938 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 8.62886597938 168% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.