Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing this letter to register a complaint in regard to my housing accommodation in Lesley Halls. Jack Dorsey and I share a unit on the third floor.
Unfortunately, since the beginning of this arrangement, I have not been able to sleep well even for a night. That is due to Jack's snoring problem. He snores so loud at night that even the best earplug cannot help minimize the noise to tolerable levels. I have even tried active-noise-canceling headphones without luck.
Lack of quality sleep at night makes me quite grumpy during the day and I can't focus very well either. This problem has started to manifest itself in my grades too. From an average of A grades, I have fallen down to an average of B+.
Since there are some empty single-person rooms available on the fourth floor, I was hoping either Jack or I could relocate to one. Although that may cost somewhat more than our current arrangement, it would be a compromise we are willing to make.
I hope your thoughtful consideration resolves the issue in a timely manner.
Yours faithfully,
Brad LaVine
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 75, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...es me quite grumpy during the day and I cant focus very well either. This problem ha...
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Line 7, column 185, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'A grade' or simply 'grades'?
Suggestion: A grade; Grades
...lf in my grades too. From an average of A grades, I have fallen down to an average of B+...
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Line 11, column 57, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a timely manner" with adverb for "timely"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...ghtful consideration resolves the issue in a timely manner. Yours faithfully, Brad LaVine
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, may, so, third, well, in regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 32.9175257732 76% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 914.0 937.175257732 98% => OK
No of words: 189.0 206.0 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.83597883598 4.54256449028 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70779275107 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96523911061 2.54303337028 117% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 127.690721649 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.714285714286 0.622605031667 115% => OK
syllable_count: 283.5 290.88556701 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.016452871 44.8134815571 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 70.3076923077 76.5299724578 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.5384615385 16.8248392259 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.92307692308 4.34317383033 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 1.49484536082 401% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.089725811885 0.216113520407 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.028121653578 0.0766984524023 37% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0324962162717 0.0603063233224 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0470162606665 0.12726935374 37% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.045661124811 0.0580467560999 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.6 8.37731958763 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 70.7449484536 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.2 8.71597938144 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.26 7.59969072165 109% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 41.2886597938 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 8.62886597938 81% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 87.0786516854 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.75 Out of 9
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