Dear Manager of Regal Theater,
I visited your branch of the Regal franchise last Friday night with my girlfriend, Nicole. We were there for the premiere of Jumanji. As we were walking in the theater towards our seats, Nicole did not notice the narrow steps in the hallway and lost her balance. As she fell down, her dress got caught by the sharp edges of the seat nearby... Thankfully she did not get hurt severely, and only a small band-aid provided by a courteous staff member stopped her arm's minor bleeding.
I believe the incident, however minor, could have been avoided had there been more lighting in the hallway. Moreover, even in case of a malfunctioning light fixture, a handrail would have been very helpful in regaining her balance... And last but not least, the seats' edges are too sharp, and they can easily bruise a person or damage clothes.
The brilliant visual quality and sound system at Regal franchise are second to none, and I hope such other facilities be held to the same standards.
Thank you very much for your time and consideration,
Yours faithfully,
Hugh Jackman
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 13, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...on, Yours faithfully, Hugh Jackman
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, moreover, second, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.03092783505 0% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 32.9175257732 55% => OK
Preposition: 17.0 26.3917525773 64% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 927.0 937.175257732 99% => OK
No of words: 189.0 206.0 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.90476190476 4.54256449028 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70779275107 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50109575382 2.54303337028 98% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 127.690721649 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.703703703704 0.622605031667 113% => OK
syllable_count: 272.7 290.88556701 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.463917525773 862% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.0373101326 44.8134815571 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.7 76.5299724578 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.9 16.8248392259 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.4 4.34317383033 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0968372947975 0.216113520407 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0314593554918 0.0766984524023 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0306737421039 0.0603063233224 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0464434822995 0.12726935374 36% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0217095041688 0.0580467560999 37% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 8.37731958763 133% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 70.7449484536 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 7.45979381443 106% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.14 8.71597938144 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.21 7.59969072165 108% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 41.2886597938 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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