Dear Sir Branson,
This letter is to request changing class hours for programming 101 from 10 PM to 8 PM. Majority of projects in this course are done in groups, and lack of enough enrollees due to the late timing of class renders a major obstacle for that goal.
There are only 3 people registered for this course at this time. Since the curriculum is arranged based on group projects of 4 people or more, it's impossible to have any presentable apps by the end of the semester.
The average class size for courses starting at 8 PM is 10 people, while that number falls down to only 5 for courses starting later on during the day. There is a good chance that by bringing hours of programming 101 forward, at least one more student enrolls in the class, hence satisfying the group project head-count requirement.
If such an arrangement cannot be honored or fails to achieve the desired increase in enrollment count, we should cancel this course for this semester.
I highly appreciate your time and consideration of this matter.
Yours faithfully,
Kurt Douglas
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, if, so, while, at least
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 32.9175257732 46% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 896.0 937.175257732 96% => OK
No of words: 185.0 206.0 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.84324324324 4.54256449028 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.68801715136 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64539237232 2.54303337028 104% => OK
Unique words: 121.0 127.690721649 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.654054054054 0.622605031667 105% => OK
syllable_count: 258.3 290.88556701 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 49.3423415199 44.8134815571 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.5555555556 76.5299724578 130% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5555555556 16.8248392259 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.33333333333 4.34317383033 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0534761090793 0.216113520407 25% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0259320697855 0.0766984524023 34% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0170409119848 0.0603063233224 28% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0302291459576 0.12726935374 24% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00468685759702 0.0580467560999 8% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 8.37731958763 138% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 70.7449484536 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.79 8.71597938144 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.21 7.59969072165 108% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 41.2886597938 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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