This is a very subjective matter and I am sure different people may have vastly different perspectives toward it, but personally, it holds true for me.
The best year of my life was my freshman year in college. It was the first time that I was living away from my parents, so their authority was not applicable to me anymore. Furthermore, I was admitted to the best university in my country. The smartest kids in my country were now my roommates and classmates. Everything felt so perfect.
On the other hand, many of my friends, from college or work, think differently. For some of them, childhood years were their best years, and to some others, their golden age is their current age. People who are pampered as kids, especially if they are the younger children in their families, tend to regard their childhoods as their favorite years. On the other hand, people who had a usual or subpar life as kids, and find meaning for life later on in their adulthood, prefer the independence and power in later stages of life.
No matter whether the perceived favoritism toward a specific age overlaps with college years or not, there is no argument that for anyone with higher-education, undergraduate years hold a dear value. After all, college years prepare the students for the careers ahead of them, and a student's performance in college determines their suitability for many career paths ahead of them accurately.
In a nutshell, freshman year in college has been my favorite year of life so far, but I'm sure different people in different stages of life may have different preferences.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 284, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'students'' or 'student's'?
Suggestion: students'; student's
...ts for the careers ahead of them, and a students performance in college determines their...
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Line 9, column 87, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
...en my favorite year of life so far, but Im sure different people in different stag...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, if, may, so, after all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1329.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 272.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.88602941176 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06108636974 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78615108486 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.540441176471 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 415.8 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 0.809619238477 618% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.9328799698 49.4020404114 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.230769231 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.9230769231 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.07692307692 7.06120827912 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.145308392957 0.244688304435 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0538206507883 0.084324248473 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0468882959313 0.0667982634062 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0796652118272 0.151304729494 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0344565080264 0.056905535591 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.08 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.82 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 78.4519038076 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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