Dear Richard,
How are you? It's been a long time since the last time we met...
I'm interested in moving to Vatican city to become the Pope and since you live there, I thought I'd ask you a few questions...
I finally got my Ph.D. in theology which qualifies me for the highest positions in the Vatican including that of the Pope. You know that I've already preached at many monasteries and churches around the world. But the Vatican has always been my dream city to preach in.
Delving into the questions... Can you please tell me about your everyday lifestyle in the Vatican? Do you have to work a 9-5 there as well or is it more flexible? How about management style? Does the Vatican truly have one of the most relaxing environments for a preacher considering the enormous tourism it attracts from all over the globe?
I'd love to learn from you as much as possible before making the official move...
Looking forward to hearing from you soon!
Best regards,
Paul Jakes
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, if, look, so, well, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 32.9175257732 64% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 820.0 937.175257732 87% => OK
No of words: 174.0 206.0 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.71264367816 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.63192868298 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45342397599 2.54303337028 96% => OK
Unique words: 120.0 127.690721649 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.689655172414 0.622605031667 111% => OK
syllable_count: 248.4 290.88556701 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.13402061856 44% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.1765339234 44.8134815571 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 63.0769230769 76.5299724578 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.3846153846 16.8248392259 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.23076923077 4.34317383033 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.159436447284 0.216113520407 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0530094905551 0.0766984524023 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.053905479781 0.0603063233224 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0764190610523 0.12726935374 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0369192429623 0.0580467560999 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.4 8.37731958763 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 75.2 70.7449484536 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 7.45979381443 80% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.45 8.71597938144 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.82 7.59969072165 90% => OK
difficult_words: 28.0 41.2886597938 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 8.62886597938 64% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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