There are many different types of music in the world today. Why do we need music? Is the traditional music of a country more important than the International music that is heard everywhere nowadays?
There is no gainsaying that given topic attracts immediate attention owing to its uniqueness. Since the dawn of the earth music exists some way or the other. There is always a heated debate over the existence. As compared to few previous decades music industry has drastically evolved and there and numerous music classifications. Music is serenity to soul. Everyone has different taste of music, some life country music and some prefer international one.
To begin with, country music has its own legacy. There are still many people exist that has traditional country music taste. In this way, these people keep their tradition and culture alive. These country music represents the culture, values and traditions at international level. One important factor that should not be overlooked it keeping the youngsters intact with traditional country music. It is of vital importance to keep them realizing the importance of sticking to their traditional values.
On the contrary, the importance and incremental demand of international music cannot be overlooked. Advance technology has turned the world into a global village. People used to listen to their own country music as they did not have access to international stuff. But in running days, it is possible with one mouse click. Internet has made access to international music so easy that it is reachable to every layman at any corner of the world. For instance, in childhood, we were only limited to listen to our local music due to non-availability and awareness of international music, but nowadays with the help of Google or Youtube, our kids listening to Justin Beiber or Medonna over their laptop or phone screens.
To recapitulate the aforementioned debate, I completely agree that local music should be promoted particularly among young children. In order to keep them tagged with their traditional norms and culture. Music will remain important and essential part in everyday life always.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, look, so, still, for instance, on the contrary, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1645.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 312.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.27243589744 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20279927342 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90887060363 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.576923076923 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 534.6 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 48.2608182273 49.4020404114 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.3333333333 106.682146367 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.8571428571 20.7667163134 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.33333333333 7.06120827912 47% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 3.4128256513 322% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.470645117909 0.244688304435 192% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.149358502791 0.084324248473 177% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0993770540534 0.0667982634062 149% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.290182890511 0.151304729494 192% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0641731179627 0.056905535591 113% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 48.81 50.2224549098 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.69 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.63 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 9.78957915832 51% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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