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Integration problems for people living abroad.
This bar chart illustrates the percentage of three age groups of immigrants who have allience difficulties in case of sorting out finances, healthcare and finding children schools.
It can be seen that sorting out healthcare is the most problematic among people who live in a new country which is the highest level for people in range 35-54 about 37 percent. The second groups who struggle with sorting out healthcare are over 55 year old that have a little diversity of the first group(36%). This issue is less common for ages 18 to 34 which is about 32 percent. The second basic problem which pub...
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sorting out healthcare is the most problematic among people
sorting out healthcare is the most problematic issue among people
The second basic problem which public in a new place engage,
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which is become serious
which has become serious
Sentence: This bar chart illustrates the percentage of three age groups of immigrants who have allience difficulties in case of sorting out finances, healthcare and finding children schools.
Error: allience Suggestion: alliance
Sentence: The second basic problem which public in a new place engage, is finding school for children wich is popular among 35 year old immigrants to 54 ones 18.
Error: wich Suggestion: No alternate word
Sentence: According to the chart, remedying money spent is another new citizens dilema which is become serious in the middle group by 35 percent and for the people aged 18 to 34 34.
Error: dilema Suggestion: dilemma
Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 6.0 out of 9
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 3 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 3 2
No. of Sentences: 9 10
No. of Words: 217 200
No. of Characters: 1009 1000
No. of Different Words: 116 100
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.838 4.0
Average Word Length: 4.65 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.453 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 70 60
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 48 50
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 26 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 18 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 24.111 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 6.471 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.444 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.437 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.664 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.087 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 4