Food can be produced cheaply by using improved fertilizers and machinery.At the same time ,it has some dangerous effects on human health and may have negative effects on local communities.to what extent do you agree or disagree.
The advancement of sophisticated technology has ushered a sea change in agreeculcher sactor. People can be use resnavel prizes of food. It is a worthwhile to improved the fertilizers and machincery .Just to provied food every vali to production of food. However, it has leeave profound on human health.I am some extent agree this stanent.
To begin with using the resnavel prizes fertilizers to increase impetus of monetary more and more quality cheap to justify People can esly reach of food which poverty-stricken People Furthermore,if people inhaste products more and more some pess of land So thes products expost food other nation.then give many which countrybute on economical withe these alore became farm industry.Furthermore using the cheaply fertilizers and machincery with these there are many oppotimum opportunities provided for inducule To justify many business oppend of argregutur filed
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, however, if, so, then, while, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 13.1623246493 23% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 7.0 24.0651302605 29% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1044.0 1615.20841683 65% => OK
No of words: 194.0 315.596192385 61% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.38144329897 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73207559907 4.20363070211 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.10292432747 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 120.0 176.041082164 68% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.618556701031 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 341.1 506.74238477 67% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 206.464547502 49.4020404114 418% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 130.5 106.682146367 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.25 20.7667163134 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.75 7.06120827912 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.157911404105 0.244688304435 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0791084066319 0.084324248473 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0591562519438 0.0667982634062 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.126247627122 0.151304729494 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0635949451435 0.056905535591 112% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.0 13.0946893788 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 30.2 50.2224549098 60% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.22 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.63 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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