Work is being done on the street where you live. The noise is disturbing you.
Write a letter of complaint to your local council. In your letter,
A) Introduce yourself
B) Explain what the problem is
C) Suggest solutions
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to put an official complain about a noise that it is being created from the construction work just outside my house on North Road.
My name is Ayoub. I have been a resident at number 178 house on North Road over 10 years, and I have never had reason to complain to the council before. When the road works started closest to my house last month, they brought heavy vehicles and machinery which create unbearable noise.
However, the street is in residential area, the maintenance work does not stop even at night. People who live in the vicinity and I are getting disturbed daily from the construction; furthermore, we are not able to have a peaceful sleep at night. This is reflecting into our performance at work, and children concentration on their studies.
I came to know that many people have reported the same issue to the council, and it is being investigated by the road maintenance department. I would therefore request that you advise the project team to cancel their night shift and ensure that they minimize any noise from the construction work in the morning.
I look forward to the problem being resolved.
Yours faithfully,
Ayoub
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 56, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'house' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'houses'.
Suggestion: houses
...b. I have been a resident at number 178 house on North Road over 10 years, and I have...
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Line 11, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...he construction work in the morning. I look forward to the problem being resol...
^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, however, if, look, so, therefore
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.48453608247 147% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.03092783505 231% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 25.0 32.9175257732 76% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.85567010309 207% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 997.0 937.175257732 106% => OK
No of words: 205.0 206.0 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.86341463415 4.54256449028 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78388967377 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6810902805 2.54303337028 105% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 127.690721649 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.634146341463 0.622605031667 102% => OK
syllable_count: 294.3 290.88556701 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.463917525773 647% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.7695755069 44.8134815571 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.6363636364 76.5299724578 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6363636364 16.8248392259 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.09090909091 4.34317383033 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.14529122109 0.216113520407 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0545437968568 0.0766984524023 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0345399130202 0.0603063233224 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0754860340568 0.12726935374 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.026792974599 0.0580467560999 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 8.37731958763 129% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 70.7449484536 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 7.45979381443 106% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.91 8.71597938144 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.61 7.59969072165 100% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 41.2886597938 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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