The following graph and pie chart show the sales of a company in the first and the second quart of the year. in percentage
Th given horizontal or circular charts depicts the information about the sale of six product of first and second quarter of the year by a company . The data is calibrated in percentum. It is clearly and coherently representation.
Overall ,it is evident that toys and clothes sales by the campany increase , however ,food, electrical and other sales decrease in second quarter.
It can be seen that , clothes and food sale high in first quarter that is 25%. Nextly other and electrical sale are five fifth or less than a fifth. Moreover toys sale is very low in first quarter of the year that is only 5% ,and computer sale by company that is 10%.
It is crystal clear , in the circular chart , electrical sale only 5% ,and computer sale same as camp are to first quarter. Furthermore. Food and clothes sale two fifth or one in ten. Nextly toys sales are very popular in second quarter that is 30%.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 86, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'product' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'products'.
Suggestion: products
...s the information about the sale of six product of first and second quarter of the year...
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Line 1, column 146, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
... second quarter of the year by a company . The data is calibrated in percentum. It...
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Line 2, column 8, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... and coherently representation. Overall ,it is evident that toys and clothes sale...
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Line 2, column 75, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...nd clothes sales by the campany increase , however ,food, electrical and other sal...
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Line 2, column 85, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... sales by the campany increase , however ,food, electrical and other sales decreas...
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Line 3, column 20, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... in second quarter. It can be seen that , clothes and food sale high in first qua...
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Line 3, column 111, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...is 25%. Nextly other and electrical sale are five fifth or less than a fifth. Mor...
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Line 3, column 150, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Moreover,
...e are five fifth or less than a fifth. Moreover toys sale is very low in first quarter ...
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Line 3, column 225, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...irst quarter of the year that is only 5% ,and computer sale by company that is 10%...
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Line 4, column 20, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ompany that is 10%. It is crystal clear , in the circular chart , electrical sale...
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Line 4, column 44, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...is crystal clear , in the circular chart , electrical sale only 5% ,and computer s...
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Line 4, column 70, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...circular chart , electrical sale only 5% ,and computer sale same as camp are to fi...
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Line 4, column 124, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Furthermore,
...sale same as camp are to first quarter. Furthermore. Food and clothes sale two fifth or one...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, however, if, moreover, second
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 7.0 186% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 6.8 176% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 5.60731707317 178% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 16.0 33.7804878049 47% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 737.0 965.302439024 76% => OK
No of words: 159.0 196.424390244 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.63522012579 4.92477711251 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.55098862472 3.73543355544 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50694306549 2.65546596893 94% => OK
Unique words: 82.0 106.607317073 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.51572327044 0.547539520022 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 229.5 283.868780488 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 22.4926829268 67% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.4006188071 43.030603864 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 73.7 112.824112599 65% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.9 22.9334400587 69% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.9 5.23603664747 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 1.69756097561 766% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.264778304269 0.215688989381 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.111599648863 0.103423049105 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0878879612929 0.0843802449381 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.184954799441 0.15604864568 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0425001424475 0.0819641961636 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.4 13.2329268293 63% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 61.2550243902 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 10.3012195122 66% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.34 11.4140731707 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.86 8.06136585366 85% => OK
difficult_words: 25.0 40.7170731707 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 11.4329268293 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.9970731707 73% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 11.0658536585 63% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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