The graph below shows average carbon dioxide emissions per person in the
united Kingdom, Sweden, Italy and Portugal between 1967 and 2007
The line chart compares information about average releasing of green house gas every person in four countries from 1967 to 2007, Overall, it is clear that United Kingdom and Sweden experienced a downward trend, while Italy and Portugal experienced a upward trend over the period shown.
Firstly, in 1967, the much larger rate was United Kingdom by releasing almost 11 metric tons. The figure for Sweden was to around 7 metric tons. The figure of Italy and Portugal were lower , at round 4.2, 1.2 metric tons respectively.
In 1987, emission carbon dioxide in both United kingdom and Sweden fall smoothly to 10, 6.7 metric tons respectively. By contrast, the figure for Italy rose just over around 7 metric tons that is similar Sweden's decline in 1987 and Portugal's figure increased almost 3.9 metric tons.
By 2007, Although UK dropped slightly to about 9 metric tons, for the figure was still the biggest. The rate for Sweden decreased approximately 5 metric tons - that was identical with Portugal's growth in 2007. The figure of Italy jumped sharply to round 7 metric tons.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, so, still, while, as to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 33.7804878049 83% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 897.0 965.302439024 93% => OK
No of words: 180.0 196.424390244 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.98333333333 4.92477711251 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.66284150148 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4618143978 2.65546596893 93% => OK
Unique words: 103.0 106.607317073 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.572222222222 0.547539520022 105% => OK
syllable_count: 265.5 283.868780488 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 67.6151053326 43.030603864 157% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.6666666667 112.824112599 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 22.9334400587 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.33333333333 5.23603664747 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.211898250774 0.215688989381 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0969695753176 0.103423049105 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0562459909058 0.0843802449381 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.140549927855 0.15604864568 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.040420531821 0.0819641961636 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.2329268293 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 61.2550243902 97% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.6 11.4140731707 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.87 8.06136585366 98% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 40.7170731707 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.