Bricks Manufacturing
The provided diagram illustrates the procedure that needs to be done for manufacturing bricks. In general, clay, as a first material, needs to be extracted from the ground and undergo several stages ,starting with griding the clay and ending with the delivering the bricks.
At the starting point of clay's extraction, a large digger is being used by the manufactors, who after this, they send the material into a metal grid. Through it, the clay becomes thinner and then it's being transported by a rolling vehicle in order to be mixed with sand and water. In the following stage, the mixture obtains their shape either by using a mould either by a wire cutter.
Thereupon, the now shaped bricks are being kept in an oven for approximately 24-48 hours, in aim to dry. Afterwards, the manufactors transport the dry bricks in a kiln with two different levels of heating. The first one has a temperature around 200 to 980 celsious , and the second one has not less than 870 and not more than 1300 celsious. Finally, the manufacturing of bricks ends with the use of a cooling chamber , in which the bricks are kept for approximately 48-72 hours. Then, they're being packed and delivered in the building and construction industry.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 199, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...om the ground and undergo several stages ,starting with griding the clay and endin...
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Line 5, column 265, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...a temperature around 200 to 980 celsious , and the second one has not less than 87...
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Line 5, column 417, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...s ends with the use of a cooling chamber , in which the bricks are kept for approx...
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Line 5, column 486, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: they're
...pt for approximately 48-72 hours. Then, theyre being packed and delivered in the build...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, if, second, then, in general
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 33.7804878049 95% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1018.0 965.302439024 105% => OK
No of words: 210.0 196.424390244 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.84761904762 4.92477711251 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.80675409584 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73361978141 2.65546596893 103% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 106.607317073 124% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.628571428571 0.547539520022 115% => OK
syllable_count: 295.2 283.868780488 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 8.0 4.33902439024 184% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 27.9420829574 43.030603864 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.8 112.824112599 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 22.9334400587 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.4 5.23603664747 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 3.70975609756 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.09268292683 244% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.182991981316 0.215688989381 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0752332086762 0.103423049105 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.116576494242 0.0843802449381 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.110457361505 0.15604864568 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.113026636507 0.0819641961636 138% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.2329268293 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 61.2550243902 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.85 11.4140731707 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.21 8.06136585366 102% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 40.7170731707 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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