You are going to another country to study. You would like to do a part-time job while you are studying, so you want to ask a friend who lives there for some help.
Write a letter to your friend. In your letter,
1- Give details of your study plans.
2- Explain why you want to get a part-time job.
3- Suggest how your friend could help you find a job.
Dear Dave,
How are you doing? I hope this letter finds you in good health and mental peace. It’s been a long time since we had conversation and I’m really excited to tell you that I got admission in the Ontario University.
The university is offering a two years course on computer science, which will really boost my academic credentials. Moreover, they provide plenty of time for assignments based on timetable that can be utilized to perform other activities. Even the tuition fee is quite less compared to all other institution which means I can easily support myself.
However, I have to rely on part-time job as bank has refused to provide loan for other expenses, such as rent and food bills. My parents are agreed to supply regular money but I want to avoid that as much as possible to avoid extra burden on them.
Could you please help me in this job hunting? As you have huge experience in Ontario and you’re familiar with the surroundings, you may provide some leads which can be very helpful to me in my initial days. I went through university map and found that there are fifteen fast-food outlets, if you can contact them for job vacancy, it’d be of great help.
See you soon!
Best wishes,
Sandip
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- The cultures of many countries around the world becomes more similar than they used to be.What are the reasons for this trend? Is it positive or negative? 73
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, may, moreover, really, so, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.03092783505 231% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 32.0 32.9175257732 97% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1037.0 937.175257732 111% => OK
No of words: 216.0 206.0 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.80092592593 4.54256449028 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.83365862548 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53946474141 2.54303337028 100% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 127.690721649 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.671296296296 0.622605031667 108% => OK
syllable_count: 318.6 290.88556701 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.3120249544 44.8134815571 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.4166666667 76.5299724578 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0 16.8248392259 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.33333333333 4.34317383033 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.246723875008 0.216113520407 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0954441522268 0.0766984524023 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0687342379611 0.0603063233224 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.131350698116 0.12726935374 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0930656224057 0.0580467560999 160% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 8.37731958763 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 70.7449484536 87% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.26 8.71597938144 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.26 7.59969072165 109% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 41.2886597938 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 8.62886597938 99% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.