Some people believe that those moving abroad should try to adapt themselves to the cultures. While some think that there is no need to do so.
Nevertheless, there are some issues which remains irrevocable and so complex as even. For instance the given topic asserts that whether migrants should adapt to local cultures or not? Through this essay, I shall explore the dimensions of this topic through examples and assertion and shape up my opinion by the end.
On one side, there is a group of people who believe that local cultures is beneficial in many ways ? The stregthen their view point by claiming that migeants understand the host culture and religion, which enhances their intellectual growth and tolerance. Second, they can develop better social and professional contacts which are of immense assistance in getting a good job or supportin other necessary requirements of surviving and growing in a new stting.
Finally, migrants who have merged with the host cultures can have an overall satisfaction of living in a foreign country. This is extremely important in developing a global community of skilled people.
Contrary to this, there is an opposing group of people who believe that we should never forget our ethnicity and never leave our culture as it is the original identity of any individual. Moreover, in most cuntries, skilled people work very hard and thus cannot spare enough time to interact socially with many people. It might affect or distract them from their work too.
Nevertheless, weighing both the opinion, I believe thst there is no single conculsion. I do not insist that we should simply leave our culture behind, but, if we want to settle in a foreign country, we must apadt to the local cultures in such a way that we face no hassle in settling there. At the same time we should be able to nurture our ethnicity and continue to take pride in our traditions.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, if, moreover, nevertheless, second, so, then, thus, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1466.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 295.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.96949152542 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14434120667 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66163906234 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.603389830508 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 457.2 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.4052613152 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.714285714 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0714285714 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.57142857143 7.06120827912 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.113554939876 0.244688304435 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0384247787154 0.084324248473 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.040360204324 0.0667982634062 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0543338125074 0.151304729494 36% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0344737484999 0.056905535591 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.85 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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