Do you agree or dis agree that children should spend more time in studying or playing rather than spending their time helping their families in day to day house hold chores. support with the reasons.
Children are like clay after giving a shape they form in that shape. So as on the basis, childhood is very important age of the life to make their future. For that most of the people think that studying and playing is important, in contrast other thinks household chores are important. this would be the grate debt. In my point of view i would like to support to give more attention for playing and studying rather than help in house hold chores. My reasons to agree the sentence are as follows.
First of all I would like to say that studying and playing is most important part in the childhood life. These make children career strong. But household work is also important to make them responsible. Children should be more focused on the studying and playing. Because somethings should be happen in certain age. Person can learn household chores in any age, but studying and playing can only be learned in childhood.
Secondly, studying and playing can make children future career. If children spend excessive time in household time they could not give required time for the important things. In my point of view children should do house hold chores in the extra time after completing major work.
In the end, household chores is also important as studying and playing, but with respect to the time, we should know what is necessity to the children.
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Message: “Because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, second, secondly, so, in contrast, first of all, with respect to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1119.0 1615.20841683 69% => OK
No of words: 235.0 315.596192385 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.76170212766 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91531732006 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.39471275157 2.80592935109 85% => OK
Unique words: 121.0 176.041082164 69% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.514893617021 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 329.4 506.74238477 65% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.6663685248 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 69.9375 106.682146367 66% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.6875 20.7667163134 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.375 7.06120827912 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.285305038729 0.244688304435 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0862220637842 0.084324248473 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0727623513337 0.0667982634062 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.177501218878 0.151304729494 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0664338177706 0.056905535591 117% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.3 13.0946893788 63% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 50.2224549098 148% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 11.3001002004 57% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 9.74 12.4159519038 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.28 8.58950901804 73% => OK
difficult_words: 29.0 78.4519038076 37% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 10.7795591182 56% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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