Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Face-to-face communication is better than other types of communication, such as letters, email, or telephone calls. Use specific reasons and details to support your answer.
Although a lot of rigid people strongly insist on the traditional relationships like face-to-face rapports, it seems to me that speaking through Yahoo messenger, Skype, and etc is not to say that in-touch friendships turn out to a throwaway commodity. Face-to-face relationships still worth so that nothing can replace by that since striking vital conversations like dating for marriage, meeting for interviewing, and commuting for other important meetings should plane by face-to-face contact. Why, then, have extraordinary relationships continued today? The reason this has welcomed by people on which they ever-increasingly tend this trend and my notion also is in favor of them is due to expanding social communities and turning world as international network on which next paragraphs will elaborate.
To begin with, the work place's most significant feature is its various connectors. Fewer people admit that just by sitting behind computers, staring at its screen, and doing just daily routine task a supposed person can promote in his/her job; he/she soon or late would tend to abolish, let alone fostered; however, increasing relationships even as extraordinary ones, taking part in social communities even by chatting through Skype or emailing to penetrative persons, and generally walking through the internet are examples of such trying. Had the rigid groups applied such strategy, they would never have taken this side. This is why technology's achievements mean in modern societies.
Additionally, local business that once was thought to characterize the work place its meaning's change is noticeable. Seeing expanding definition of work place as an environment for challenging with public, comparing that with just ten years ago, some people sometime forgot the process of changing of the latter to the former; years before far-distance jobs did not mean at all; however, nowadays men entertain with their works from their homes besides their wives behind the internet. No wonder, internet's fans drastically tend to rise day in day out.
Al l in all, to put the issue into a nut shell, expanding current societies led them to tend using extraordinary communities and far-distance relationships, both of those take into account of the technology's bounty.
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The reason this has welcomed by people on which they ever-increasingly tend this trend and my notion also is in favor of them is due to expanding social communities and turning world as international network on which next paragraphs will elaborate.
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