Some people choose to eat no meat or fish. They believe that this is not only better for their own health but also benefits the world as a whole. Discuss advantage and disadvantage of having vegetarian diet and give your own opinion.
There is no doubt that a vegetarian diet can be considered more healthier option in compared to other meals. As it contains many useful substances and consists of green-fresh vegetables, it will totally be benefit to human body in terms of sickness and physical health. This essay is of opinion that a vegetarian diet is perfect choice for ones who want to remain as healthier person and will discuss advantage and disadvantage of having such diet in forthcoming paragraphs.
First of all , we could accept that a vegetarian meals are usually less expensive than other meals. It does means that though there are not much more choice in restaurants , whenever you eat them, you will pay a little amount of money. When steak or special burger are chosen in eating house, at the receipt of dinner will be seen clearly . For example ; according to www.zomato.com, while some homemade salads cost between 5 or 10 USD for customer, prices of private foods such as beef, fish, and chicken often starts from above 20 USD.
On the other hand, we cannot ignore detrimental effects of following the vegetarian diet. As a smart creature, we will need some substance that we get from foods such as vitamin D- C, calcium, iron in order to survive In addition to that eating a just same products at all part of day can increase your risk of being unhealthy person in the future. For instance, the latest survey done by Oxford University , has shown that there are a third risk of catching serious sickness for people who always prefer vegetable diet without eating needed substance.
In conclusion, with both side has negative and positive sides , from my perspective of view it exactly depends on personal expectations, ideas about health issue and other conditions.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, so, third, while, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, no doubt, such as, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1461.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 297.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.91919191919 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15134772569 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66051638572 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.653198653199 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 444.6 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 52.9208047014 49.4020404114 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 132.818181818 106.682146367 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.0 20.7667163134 130% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.8181818182 7.06120827912 167% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 5.01903807615 259% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.186439687496 0.244688304435 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0643126799398 0.084324248473 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.05527924131 0.0667982634062 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0998157071912 0.151304729494 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0648670733807 0.056905535591 114% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.0946893788 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.53 50.2224549098 105% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.91 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.