Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
In twenty years there will be fewer cars in use than there are today.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Nowadays, automobiles play an important role in our life. people use cars to commute from home to work Students use that To going to university police use that to doing their duty and etc...
Some people believe that using of cars decrease in twenty years later but others think that using of cars increase annually.
In my view using of automobiles increasing every year and by-product, this means producing of cars increase in twenty years later I think that for two main reasons.
First of all, each car manufacturer claims that demand for their production raises each year and they decide to enhance their Production because if they cannot increase their product its lead to increasing cars price thereby when demand of one thing Increase for balancing between demand and produce need to increase production.
For example two days ago I listened to the radio news and heard that Irankhodro which is one of our country car Manufacturers decide to enhance car production about 20 percent toward the past year.
Secondly, in my country, public transportation is very weak and there aren't any convenient facilities in this category people In my country prefer to use their own car instead of public transportation thus demands for car buying increase every day
For example, my workplace is in 20 kilometers from my home and there isn't any bus stop in that’s way and its necessary for Me using my cars. I hadn't car last year but for being on time in my workplace I bought a new car as you can see lack of Public Transportation facility oblige people to buy cars.
As a result, depending on the development of your country in public transportation categorial demand for automobile Increase gradually and people are convenient to use their own cars than other ways.
The production of the car not only decrease in twenty years later but also enhance as much as car company could produce.
- When you decide to find a place to travel and want to compare two places, which way do you think help you make a better decision? - read information online - discussing with a friend who has been to those places 70
- Compare and contrast your way of life with that of your parents. Which way of life do you think would be more satisfying to future generations? 70
- People work because they need money to live. What are some other reasons that people work? Discuss one or more of these reasons. Use specific examples and details to support your answer. 66
- do you agree or disagree? the bosses have to pay their employees to get a university degree. 76
- Tpo 46 80
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 59, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: People
...les play an important role in our life. people use cars to commute from home to work S...
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Line 1, column 181, Rule ID: AND_ETC[1]
Message: Use simply 'etc.'.
Suggestion: etc.
...ity police use that to doing their duty and etc... Some people believe that using of ca...
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Line 6, column 71, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: aren't
...c transportation is very weak and there arent any convenient facilities in this categ...
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Line 7, column 70, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: isn't
...in 20 kilometers from my home and there isnt any bus stop in that's way and its...
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Line 7, column 149, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: hadn't
...d its necessary for Me using my cars. I hadnt car last year but for being on time in ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, second, secondly, so, thus, for example, i think, as a result, first of all, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 15.1003584229 33% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 43.0788530466 84% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 52.1666666667 86% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.0752688172 161% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1578.0 1977.66487455 80% => OK
No of words: 323.0 407.700716846 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.88544891641 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23936324884 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69251610142 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 212.727598566 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.510835913313 0.524837075471 97% => OK
syllable_count: 492.3 618.680645161 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.59856630824 31% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 20.6003584229 49% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 32.0 20.1344086022 159% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 96.2644274901 48.9658058833 197% => OK
Chars per sentence: 157.8 100.406767564 157% => OK
Words per sentence: 32.3 20.6045352989 157% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.9 5.45110844103 200% => OK
Paragraphs: 9.0 4.53405017921 198% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 11.8709677419 34% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.171007037745 0.236089414692 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0934578641451 0.076458572812 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0495623691038 0.0737576698707 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0980889983897 0.150856017488 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0385898389486 0.0645574589148 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.8 11.7677419355 151% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.46 58.1214874552 82% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 10.1575268817 144% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.67 10.9000537634 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.01 8.01818996416 100% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 86.8835125448 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.8 10.0537634409 147% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.247311828 146% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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