Do you agree or disagree with the following statement: "Life today is easier and more comfortable than it was when your grandparents were children.”

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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement: "Life today is easier and more comfortable than it was when your grandparents were children.”

It’s a well known fact that nowadays life of the children and teenagers is easier and more comfortable than it used to be when our grandparents were of our age.This success happened because not only of the progress the humanity registered in fields like educatation and children rights,but also because of the inventions made by great and bright minds,which help us every day by saving our time.Obviously,there is no doubt In the affirmation that life is easier and more comfortable than it used to be when our grandparents were children,thus I agree with the statement written above because of the following coagent reasons.

First, nowadays children get a better education from school.It must be admitted that our grandparents had a more tough childhood than we do.Most ppl of the age of my grandparens had not finished the primary school.As I’m living in a post-soviet country,my grandparents were true citizens of the Soviet Union.Most of their time,including the school and free time,the children had to work on fields or factories,they were required to do it instead of enjoying their childhood .

Second,it can also be admitted that our grandparens had a difficult childhood because there were no modern technologies which could help them around the house or could entertain them.There was no internet or computer games.My grandfather told me that they had 3 national TV programs which they could watch in the evening,being exhausted after a hard-working day in the field.Nowadays,we have got computers,wifi and a lot of tv programs,and still a lot of children or teenagers keep complaining about how boring their lives are.

In conclusion,I believe that our life became easier than it used to be when our grandparents were children.I hope that every child and teenager will understand this thing,and will be thankfull for the great and comfortable childhood they have,because only a happy and well behaved young generation is able to build and mentain a free and democratic society we all want to live in.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, second, so, still, thus, well, in conclusion, no doubt

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 15.1003584229 126% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 13.8261648746 137% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 44.0 43.0788530466 102% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 52.1666666667 69% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1708.0 1977.66487455 86% => OK
No of words: 327.0 407.700716846 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.22324159021 4.8611393121 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25242769721 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.25184561836 2.67179642975 122% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 212.727598566 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.547400611621 0.524837075471 104% => OK
syllable_count: 509.4 618.680645161 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 20.6003584229 19% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 81.0 20.1344086022 402% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 89.8776946745 48.9658058833 184% => OK
Chars per sentence: 427.0 100.406767564 425% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 81.75 20.6045352989 397% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 19.0 5.45110844103 349% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 33.0 5.5376344086 596% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 11.8709677419 25% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.253424832575 0.236089414692 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.150515807284 0.076458572812 197% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0970557566962 0.0737576698707 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.150515807284 0.150856017488 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0970557566962 0.0645574589148 150% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 44.0 11.7677419355 374% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -10.74 58.1214874552 -18% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 14.6 6.10430107527 239% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 34.9 10.1575268817 344% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 14.18 10.9000537634 130% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.13 8.01818996416 139% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 86.8835125448 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 58.0 10.002688172 580% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 34.4 10.0537634409 342% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 15.0 10.247311828 146% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:

para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.

So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:

reasons == advantages or

reasons == disadvantages

for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.

or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.


Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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