The flowchart illustrates the production of colored plastic paper clips in a small factory.

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The flowchart illustrates the production of colored plastic paper clips in a small factory.

The given flowchart shows clarify the yielding of coloured plastic paper clips in a small industry in 3 stages.small industry was production of many different coloured plastic paper.
It can be seen that the 3 main stages was production of coloured plastic paper.Whereas,the first stage was motlen plastic as well as 2nd stage quality control and 3rd stage was sort by hand.In first stage production different three colours was red mould,blue mould and yellow mould.After that,then control all 3 moulds with quality control.Moreover,machine check for strength all mould then rejected.Although,then 3rd stage sort by hand under two different types colour that is single colour and mixed colour.As well as,these colour was also control with quality control.Whereas,under quality control check colour mixture and single.Afterthat,all procedure done then packing and despatch.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 145, Rule ID: NUMEROUS_DIFFERENT[1]
Message: Use simply 'many'.
Suggestion: many
...stages.small industry was production of many different coloured plastic paper. It can be seen ...
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Line 2, column 80, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Whereas
...as production of coloured plastic paper.Whereas,the first stage was motlen plastic as w...
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Line 2, column 87, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , the
...uction of coloured plastic paper.Whereas,the first stage was motlen plastic as well ...
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Line 2, column 191, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: In
... control and 3rd stage was sort by hand.In first stage production different three ...
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Line 2, column 254, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , blue
...on different three colours was red mould,blue mould and yellow mould.After that,then ...
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Line 2, column 283, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: After
...s red mould,blue mould and yellow mould.After that,then control all 3 moulds with qua...
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Line 2, column 293, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , then
...d,blue mould and yellow mould.After that,then control all 3 moulds with quality contr...
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Line 2, column 341, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Moreover
...ntrol all 3 moulds with quality control.Moreover,machine check for strength all mould th...
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Line 2, column 349, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , machine
...l 3 moulds with quality control.Moreover,machine check for strength all mould then rejec...
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Line 2, column 401, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Although
...ck for strength all mould then rejected.Although,then 3rd stage sort by hand under two d...
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Line 2, column 409, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , then
...trength all mould then rejected.Although,then 3rd stage sort by hand under two differ...
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Line 2, column 510, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
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Suggestion: As
... that is single colour and mixed colour.As well as,these colour was also control w...
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Line 2, column 520, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , these
...ingle colour and mixed colour.As well as,these colour was also control with quality co...
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Line 2, column 572, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Whereas
...r was also control with quality control.Whereas,under quality control check colour mixt...
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Line 2, column 579, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , under
...lso control with quality control.Whereas,under quality control check colour mixture an...
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Line 2, column 634, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Afterthat
...control check colour mixture and single.Afterthat,all procedure done then packing and des...
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Line 2, column 643, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , all
...heck colour mixture and single.Afterthat,all procedure done then packing and despatc...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, moreover, so, then, well, whereas, as well as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 13.0 33.7804878049 38% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 744.0 965.302439024 77% => OK
No of words: 129.0 196.424390244 66% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.76744186047 4.92477711251 117% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.37013600491 3.73543355544 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.88153089314 2.65546596893 146% => OK
Unique words: 78.0 106.607317073 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.604651162791 0.547539520022 110% => OK
syllable_count: 207.9 283.868780488 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 2.0 8.94146341463 22% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 64.0 22.4926829268 285% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 253.0 43.030603864 588% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 372.0 112.824112599 330% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 64.5 22.9334400587 281% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 31.0 5.23603664747 592% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 2.0 3.83414634146 52% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 17.0 1.69756097561 1001% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.141611212203 0.215688989381 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.198924247123 0.103423049105 192% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.144200787626 0.0843802449381 171% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.198924247123 0.15604864568 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.144200787626 0.0819641961636 176% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 38.0 13.2329268293 287% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 6.52 61.2550243902 11% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 6.51609756098 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 28.3 10.3012195122 275% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 17.07 11.4140731707 150% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.61 8.06136585366 132% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 40.7170731707 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 27.0 11.4329268293 236% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 27.6 10.9970731707 251% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 28.0 11.0658536585 253% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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