“In a war of ideas, it is people who get killed”. Does a common man suffer from a group’s ideology? Express your opinion, and support the same with reasons and examples.
Common men suffer from a group's ideology has been the epicenter of discussion in multiple forums and a conclusive unanimous agreement is yet to be achieved. Different distinguished have expressed their views both in favor and against the very idea of group's ideology through multiple modes of communication be it a main stream media or be it the social media. Below in essay of mine I will try to enunciate that innocent people always suffer because of war between two countries or group's through some examples.
The most prominent reason is that when there is a war between two countries lots of people are involved to fight against each other. Moreover, these people treat each other as evil and try to kill or injured each other. In addition, in world war II, when USA, China and UK decided to attack with atomic bomb on Japan and destroyed two cities Hiroshima and Nagasaki and killed more than one lakh civilians. However, US, China and Uk won the war but the side effects of those bombs still affecting many people in Japan.
Continuing to this sometimes the war between two groups can create nuisance to the public as in India many times Hindu and Muslim groups always fight with each other. Furthermore, sometimes these fights turn into a massive war and government has to issue a curfew in that area by closing all the markets, roads and so on. Moreover, terrorist always hit the place like temple, hotel and kill innocent people.
While on the other hand, there are people who will still continue to wrangling about the facts of group's ideology. I would like to conclude that whenever there is a fight between two groups it is the innocent people who put their lives in danger and suffer a lot.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 26, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'groups'' or 'group's'?
Suggestion: groups'; group's
Common men suffer from a groups ideology has been the epicenter of disc...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, still, while, as to, in addition, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.5418719212 104% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 6.10837438424 65% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 8.36945812808 215% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 8.0 5.94088669951 135% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 20.9802955665 76% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 31.9359605911 147% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.75862068966 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1427.0 1207.87684729 118% => OK
No of words: 299.0 242.827586207 123% => OK
Chars per words: 4.77257525084 5.00649968141 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1583189471 3.92707691288 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.409354892 2.71678728327 89% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 139.433497537 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.558528428094 0.580463131201 96% => OK
syllable_count: 441.9 379.143842365 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.5024630542 117% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.9948408896 50.4703680194 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.916666667 104.977214359 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.9166666667 20.9669160288 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 7.25397266985 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 6.9802955665 29% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 2.75862068966 362% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.186861636535 0.242375264174 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0697215465096 0.0925447433944 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0310049267625 0.071462118173 43% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11159521509 0.151781067708 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0283381047542 0.0609392437508 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 12.6369458128 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 53.1260098522 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.9458128079 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.68 11.5310837438 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.21 8.32886699507 99% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 55.0591133005 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.94827586207 141% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.3980295567 112% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.5123152709 133% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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