The chart below shows the percentage of households in owned and rented accommodation in England and Wales between 1918-2011

Essay topics:

The chart below shows the percentage of households in owned and rented accommodation in England and Wales between 1918-2011

The table chart compares information about the proportion of household in possessed and rented apartment in two regions from 1948 to 2011.
Overall, renting accommodation tend to an upward trend, while possessing tend to a downward a over the period shown. Leasing house reached peak in 1918 and the lowest figure was in 2011 when was peak for owning.

In 1918, the percentage for renting was approximately 77 per that was peak, whereas the proportion for owning was to around with 23 per which means less almost by 50 per than renting. For leasing, the rates were dropped continually and the figures were jumped constantly. however, in 1971, the percentage of both were equal exactly by 50 per.

In 1981, Owning accommodation rate rose to 60 percent that was almost similar with renting house in 1961. At the same time, the rate of lease fell speedy until 40 percent which was also identical with own house's proportion in 1961.

In 2001, the figure of possessing apartment was reached peak to around with 69 per, then turn, was decreased approximately to 64 percent in 2011. For renting, the smallest percentage was occurred in 2001 by 30 per, after, it was rose to 36 percent.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 93, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
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Line 4, column 273, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: However
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, so, then, whereas, while, as to

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 7.0 200% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 33.7804878049 112% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.97073170732 201% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 988.0 965.302439024 102% => OK
No of words: 203.0 196.424390244 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.86699507389 4.92477711251 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.77462671648 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62415046128 2.65546596893 99% => OK
Unique words: 115.0 106.607317073 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.566502463054 0.547539520022 103% => OK
syllable_count: 279.0 283.868780488 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.0652539021 43.030603864 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.8 112.824112599 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3 22.9334400587 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.6 5.23603664747 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.09268292683 195% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.155860658223 0.215688989381 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0689626409259 0.103423049105 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0480217398851 0.0843802449381 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.099020284112 0.15604864568 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0412947149477 0.0819641961636 50% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.2329268293 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 61.2550243902 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.3012195122 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.97 11.4140731707 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.97 8.06136585366 99% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 40.7170731707 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.

Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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