Write a letter complaining about the dirty roads and garbage in your street.
• Why it is effect and problem
• What is the main causes
• Your suggestions.
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to bring to your attention a filthy area closest to my house on the North Road.
I have been a resident on North Road over 10 years, and I have never had a reason to complain to the council before. Recently, I noticed that massive amount of litters exits at the corner of the road, and it results a sore image to all people who live in the vicinity. Furthermore, keeping litters for long will cause a hazard area with possibility for different diseases. it is also effecting on the business market who located at the nearby places.
The council had earlier a contract with a waste management company, and it was responsible for the collection of waste and garbage which were created from all residents and tenants. When the contract has expired with the company, we noticed that no alternative action was taken by the council department to secure garbage collection. The waste`s skips were filled and garbage became over the road.
Council has previously his own team who were maintaining the area clean. Rather than wait till signing a new contract with other company, I would ask that you deploy your staff to clean the area from all created wastes and that you ensure they eliminate the pollution by regular inspection.
I look forward to the problem being resolved.
Yours faithfully,
Ayoub
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...ention a filthy area closest to my house on the North Road. I have been a resi...
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...ith possibility for different diseases. it is also effecting on the business marke...
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... created wastes and that you ensure they eliminate the pollution by regular inspe...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, if, look, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 3.03092783505 297% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 22.0 32.9175257732 67% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 26.3917525773 114% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1124.0 937.175257732 120% => OK
No of words: 231.0 206.0 112% => OK
Chars per words: 4.8658008658 4.54256449028 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89854898053 3.78020617076 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57521548372 2.54303337028 101% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 127.690721649 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.606060606061 0.622605031667 97% => OK
syllable_count: 343.8 290.88556701 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.463917525773 647% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.5849872523 44.8134815571 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.6666666667 76.5299724578 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.25 16.8248392259 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.58333333333 4.34317383033 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.148170287489 0.216113520407 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0574380488459 0.0766984524023 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0445979372448 0.0603063233224 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.076757342968 0.12726935374 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0415778099775 0.0580467560999 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 8.37731958763 133% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 70.7449484536 86% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.97 8.71597938144 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.41 7.59969072165 111% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 41.2886597938 136% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.