Write a letter complaining about the dirty roads and garbage in your street Why it is effect and problem What is the main causes Your suggestions

Dear Sir,
With due respect, I am writing this letter to complain regarding the litter on the roads in Las Vinci Street, Sunbury.
Due to the garbage lying on the road, it creates a lot of trouble to the residents of the society. First of all, since the corresponding area is absorbed in a foul smell, it is very difficult for padestrians to cross the road. Not only does it hampers to local people, but also hinders the traffic on the road.
Further, one of the primary factors responsible for filthy roads is that there is neither a provision for waste disposing nor any dustbins available on the either sides of the road. Hence, most people throw garbage besides road, and consequently, it slips on the road which causes accidents on the road.
Lastly, it would be appreciated if you could provide your assistance in curbing out this issue. I would recommend to provide waste disposable bins on the either sides of the road so that people may throw the garbage there. Along with that, there must be proper waste management system includng garbage collector and fine for throwing outside on the roads.
I look forwad for your kind cooperation.
Yours faithfully,
John Smith

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Average: 8.9 (1 vote)
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 244, Rule ID: DOES_NP_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'hamper'?
Suggestion: hamper
...ans to cross the road. Not only does it hampers to local people, but also hinders the t...
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Line 3, column 244, Rule ID: DOES_X_HAS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'hamper'? As 'do' is already inflected, the verb cannot also be inflected.
Suggestion: hamper
...ans to cross the road. Not only does it hampers to local people, but also hinders the t...
^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 104, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'recommend providing'.
Suggestion: recommend providing
...ance in curbing out this issue. I would recommend to provide waste disposable bins on the either sid...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, consequently, first, hence, if, lastly, look, may, regarding, so, first of all

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 32.9175257732 52% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 26.3917525773 114% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 980.0 937.175257732 105% => OK
No of words: 204.0 206.0 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.80392156863 4.54256449028 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.77926670891 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53766323956 2.54303337028 100% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 127.690721649 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.622549019608 0.622605031667 100% => OK
syllable_count: 291.6 290.88556701 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.442980843 44.8134815571 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.0909090909 76.5299724578 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5454545455 16.8248392259 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.90909090909 4.34317383033 205% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.49484536082 334% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.224697312649 0.216113520407 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0842052754241 0.0766984524023 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0465880268059 0.0603063233224 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115802881915 0.12726935374 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0343250068734 0.0580467560999 59% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 8.37731958763 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 70.7449484536 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 7.45979381443 106% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.56 8.71597938144 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.24 7.59969072165 108% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 41.2886597938 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.