Recent advances in air travel have focused only on those sitting in upper class and have left other passengers with no benefits. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Air Travel is one of the fastest means of transport which is expensive too. In this transport there are upper class and lower class passengers. In the recent advances in air travel have focused only on upper class passengers and due to this other passengers have left with no benefits. As per my knowledge, I agreed on this statement.
Air Travel is fastest means of transport and expensive too. Air travel has two classes of passengers, one is upper class passengers and second is lower class passengers. Nowadays to attract customers, Air tarvel are giving very good deals at reasonable rates but they are now lacking in providing the services especially to lower class passengers. As they have decreased the fare charges for lower class passengers to increase their passengers so they are providing them no benefits which is acceptable. They are focussing only on Upper class passenders as they are charging high fare from them. For example Last time when I was travelling through Airways then I have taken Lower class ticket and they provided me nothing during my travel.
Nowadays Life is so busy, everyone wants to save time, so everyone like to opt for air travel to save time and money. But as fas as benefits are concerned, so lower class passengers are compromising on this. Air travel has no concerned with it that they should provide benefits like meals, vouchers etc. They are focussing only on the upper class passengers. Air tarvel is focussing only on making money.
In Conlcusion, Air Travel companies should focuss on giving benefits to all the passengers as they are charging from them too and should provide the services. Air travel compaines goodwill/reputation depends upon the fare charges, benefits and services provided by them. They should not remain focused only on passengers sitting in upper class.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 12, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'is the fastest'.
Suggestion: is the fastest
...agreed on this statement. Air Travel is fastest means of transport and expensive too. ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, second, so, then, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1534.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 305.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.02950819672 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17902490978 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69481471293 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 176.041082164 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.44262295082 0.561755894193 79% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 470.7 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.8136477004 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.2222222222 106.682146367 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.9444444444 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.11111111111 7.06120827912 30% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.363334900936 0.244688304435 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.139717439885 0.084324248473 166% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.123961162396 0.0667982634062 186% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.261232162593 0.151304729494 173% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0989836826113 0.056905535591 174% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 50.2224549098 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.6 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.38 8.58950901804 86% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 78.4519038076 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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