In some countries it is illegal for employers to reject applicants due to his/her age.
Positive or negative development?
give your own opinion.
Some governments enforce laws against age discrimination in the hiring decisions. In my opinion, This regulation is a very positive development for the employees, the employers, the society, and the country.
First of all, it can be guaranteed that the hiring the right person for the right position. Not only old people but also young people face bias against their age when they apply for the job. Young people are generally not considered for the leadership position even though they have excellent technical skills and personal skills because of the stereotype that young people can not lead. On the other hand, old people are generally rejected due to the perception of their low energy, health issues, and retirement problems. When ageism is controlled by laws, it guarantees that the hiring of the right person based on his or her skills.
Another benefit is that it supports women workforce. Women who aged especially in their late 20's and around 30 are considered that they may become pregnant soon also they are a burden and unreliable. Because of that, they have disadvantages comparing to male peers for the same future position. The government encourages those women via laws.
Finally, recruitment based on individual's skills create fairness and increase productivity in a work environment which results in economic advancement in the country. If age discrimination is prevalent in a state, seniors would have difficulties to find a job, and it causes a financial strain on younger workers. Furthermore, inequality in employment is associated with lower job satisfaction, engagement, performance and mental health, as well as higher turnover in a company. Therefore employees will increase the stability, creativity, and growth opportunity for the company and government in longterm when ageism is prevented by government.
In conclusion, having legislation against ageism while hiring is a positive development and have many significant benefits not only the company but also the employee, society, and the future of the country.
- Caring for children is probably the most important job in any society. Because of this, all mothers and fathers should be required to take a course that prepares them to be good parents. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this view? 78
- In some countries it is illegal for employers to reject applicants due to his/her age.Positive or negative development?give your own opinion. 78
- In many countries, prison is the most common solution for crimes. However, many think that better education is the most effective way to prevent people from committing further crime. To what extent do you agree or disagree. 73
- Some people support the development of agriculture, like factory farming and the scientific creation of fruits and vegetables, while others oppose.Discuss both views and give your opinion. 78
- Some parents believe that child should not waste time by reading entertainment books but instead they should spend time to read educational books only. What is your opinion about this? 78
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 480, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
...s well as higher turnover in a company. Therefore employees will increase the stability, ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, furthermore, if, may, so, therefore, well, while, in conclusion, as well as, first of all, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 20.0 8.3376753507 240% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1735.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 322.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.38819875776 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23607819155 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99901768828 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.562111801242 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 538.2 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 0.809619238477 618% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.9564586729 49.4020404114 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.4375 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.125 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.375 7.06120827912 133% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.153207734954 0.244688304435 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0460094389829 0.084324248473 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0384397163498 0.0667982634062 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0844814396398 0.151304729494 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0554883729642 0.056905535591 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.98 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.99 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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