Everyone should become vegetarian because they do not need to eat meat to have a healthy diet. Do you agree or disagree?
Vegetariansm is considered the most common diet among society, mostly in western countries. It is believed that meat is not necessary to create a nutritious appetite. Personally, I believe vegetarian diet should be applied to everyone's diet.
The first reason is vegetarian diet is healthier than carnivore diet. Getting nutrients from plants, vegetables and fruits prevents human from overderives cholesterol which is the main cause of heart attack, stroke and diabetes. Furthermore, vegetables and plants contain high concentation of vitamins improve human's health and avoid illness. For example, eating an apple a day is proved to prevent heart diseases.
The second reason is vegetarian help humanrace with different aspect. Eating plants, vegetables and fruits hinder animals from being slaughtered, which protect the earth's biodiversity. Additionally, becoming vegetarians help to reduce pollution by reduce chemical and animal waste from the meat industry. Thus, you will help reduce famine since there is no need to use the plants to feed animals raised for slaughter.
In conclusion, since becoming vegetarian helps us with our health and environmental issues, I believe everyone should become a vegetarian.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 165, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'earths'' or 'earth's'?
Suggestion: earths'; earth's
...om being slaughtered, which protect the earths biodiversity. Additionally, becoming ve...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, if, second, so, thus, for example, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 7.0 24.0651302605 29% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 41.998997996 48% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1044.0 1615.20841683 65% => OK
No of words: 182.0 315.596192385 58% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.73626373626 5.12529762239 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67297393991 4.20363070211 87% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94847677215 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 121.0 176.041082164 69% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.664835164835 0.561755894193 118% => OK
syllable_count: 315.9 506.74238477 62% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.6845874217 49.4020404114 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 87.0 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.1666666667 20.7667163134 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.66666666667 7.06120827912 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.2074942645 0.244688304435 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0752438938854 0.084324248473 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0686697487435 0.0667982634062 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.131107403741 0.151304729494 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0487205098637 0.056905535591 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.79 50.2224549098 95% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.42 12.4159519038 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.24 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 78.4519038076 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.