Task 2: Some people think the government funding should not be used for supporting art and culture, others think supporting cultural activities may be beneficial for the population and the culture. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
At the present time, some people believe that government should invest in different sectors rather than spend money assisting artistic and cultural activities, however, population can also benefit significantly from cultural programs supported by authorities. In my opinion, while I agree with the first idea, I reckon that the culture should be paid attention.
There are many reasons why modern sectors such as industry should be focused mainly by governments. Firstly, with the advances of science and technology, our lives are considerably ameliorated by modern machines. For instance, in Japan, the presence of a robot named ASIMO has ripple effects on investments of nations. Therefore, most governments spend a great amount of money on industry annually. Secondly, industry is regarded as a new way of assessment between economies of countries. Take an example, in most developing countries such as Vietnam, industrialization and modernization are important problems which are determined mainly by government.
On the other hand, there are some arguments which indicate that the culture can be beneficial for society substantially. Many people believe that not only are art and culture conserved comprehensively, but they should also be assisted from government incentives. This can be explained by the necessity of culture in our lives. For instance, in Vietnam, government encourages students and children to take part in classes or seminars which introduce about different cultural identities.
Furthermore, local committees also offer financial assistance to cultural preservations.
In conclusion, personally, there are many advantages of enhancing sectors. Nevertheless, the culture should be maintained.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, therefore, while, for instance, i reckon, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1480.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 252.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.87301587302 5.12529762239 115% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98428260373 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.25142176781 2.80592935109 116% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.619047619048 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 466.2 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 50.2745351932 49.4020404114 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.6666666667 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.4666666667 7.06120827912 177% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.243189152749 0.244688304435 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0784983913363 0.084324248473 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0696661937199 0.0667982634062 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125212916145 0.151304729494 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.083153003236 0.056905535591 146% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.31 50.2224549098 76% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.47 12.4159519038 133% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.01 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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