Men and women are inherently different in the tasks they can perform
Men and Women are fundamentally different in their physiology. Having established that, it is meet to also note that this difference in physical characteristics results in differences in morphology with the corrollary that there have been rule-of-the-thumb conventions that assigns specific functions to both sexes. Generally, the female gender is considered the fairer sex.
I completely disagree with the notion that because of the inherent differences in chracteristics between the men and women, they are not,as such, equally suited for many tasks. In the previous ages and centuries, non-emancipation of women rights which resulted in the female sex being confined to domestic chores and the lower rung of the socio economic ladder has propagated and ensured that specific tasks and roles in the society are reserved for the female while the more important ones are the exclusive purview of the male sex.
This has been the case over time. Nevertheless, over time and along the centuries and ages, a few women find a way to shatter this glass ceiling, thereby successfully ensuring that thier names are written in gold in the annals of history. Such women include the Joan D'arc - a heroine of the independence of France and one the patron saints of France, Queen Victoria - a puritan who had a whole human epoch named after her called the Victorian age which marks a golden era in the history of the expansion of the British empire. In fact, Great Britain have been successfully ruled by female monarchs who have been adroit as regards the affairs of state, such include Queen Elizabeth 1 whose rulership made Great Britain the number one world power.
Asides these successful rulers by reason of birth, there have been democratically elected female Prime ministers (Bhutto in Pakistan, Merkel in Germany and so on, who have performed exceptionally), Presidents (Sirleaf in Liberia), Secretary of state (Clinton in America).
Still and asides the spheres of politics, there have been women technocrats (Lagarde of the International Monetary Fund) , women Navigators (Amelia Earhart) , sportswomen ( Williams sisters) - these exceptional ladies have helped in consigning the thought and notion that specific task, jobs, vocations are the exclusive preserve of a particular sex.
The truth is that our society will benefit from not nurturing such chauvinistic and downright misogynistic view that the domestic sphere of the home serves as the best place for women to exert their natural influence. In the western world, such views have been banished to an extent (the #MeToo tsunami sweeping through Hollywood comes to mind) but in the developing world and Africa expecially, the women face a herculean tasks of shedding the confining toga of being called the weaker sex and not being suited for some tasks. It will be benevolent to our world and the society we live in to dispense with such patrochial and insular views, to be all-welcoming to both sexes in any sphere - be it corporate, politics or otherwise, so that there will be holistic contribution and solutions to the problems that p
- a person who knowingly commits a crime has broken the social contract and should not retain aNy civil rights or the right to benefit from his or her own labor 54
- Men and women are inherently different in the tasks they can perform 83
- Manned space flight is costly and dangerous. Moreover, the recent success of a series of unmanned space probes and satellites has demonstrated that a great deal of useful information can be gathered without the costs and risks associated with sending men 41
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 137, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , as
... between the men and women, they are not,as such, equally suited for many tasks. In...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Still,
...cretary of state Clinton in America. Still and asides the spheres of politics, the...
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Line 8, column 119, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...garde of the International Monetary Fund , women Navigators Amelia Earhart , sport...
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...y Fund , women Navigators Amelia Earhart , sportswomen Williams sisters - these e...
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Line 8, column 167, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... Navigators Amelia Earhart , sportswomen Williams sisters - these exceptional lad...
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Line 10, column 422, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'task'?
Suggestion: task
... expecially, the women face a herculean tasks of shedding the confining toga of being...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, nevertheless, so, still, while, as regards, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 19.5258426966 118% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 12.4196629213 24% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 14.8657303371 135% => OK
Relative clauses : 18.0 11.3162921348 159% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 33.0505617978 85% => OK
Preposition: 66.0 58.6224719101 113% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 12.9106741573 39% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2591.0 2235.4752809 116% => OK
No of words: 499.0 442.535393258 113% => OK
Chars per words: 5.19238476954 5.05705443957 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.72634191566 4.55969084622 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86660868423 2.79657885939 103% => OK
Unique words: 283.0 215.323595506 131% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.567134268537 0.4932671777 115% => OK
syllable_count: 821.7 704.065955056 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.2370786517 69% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 35.0 23.0359550562 152% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 100.511675634 60.3974514979 166% => OK
Chars per sentence: 185.071428571 118.986275619 156% => OK
Words per sentence: 35.6428571429 23.4991977007 152% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.71428571429 5.21951772744 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 7.80617977528 77% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 10.2758426966 78% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.182698892787 0.243740707755 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0695766028445 0.0831039109588 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0874771695922 0.0758088955206 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.094985637461 0.150359130593 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0657420100735 0.0667264976115 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.8 14.1392134831 147% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.95 48.8420337079 74% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.9 12.1743820225 139% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.41 12.1639044944 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.4 8.38706741573 124% => OK
difficult_words: 159.0 100.480337079 158% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 11.8971910112 109% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.0 11.2143820225 143% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.7820224719 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 83.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 6
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