In some countries people prefer to rent a house for accommodation while in other countries people prefer to buy their own house? Does rental house have more advantages than disadvantages?
It is incontrovertible fact that the selecting a place to live in and whether to rent it or own it is a big decision to make. This given topic asserts that in few nations masses prefer to live in rental house rather than the own house; does rental house more merits as compared to the demerits. I am going to explicate my view points in upcomping paragraphs as well as I think the rental house more disadvantages rather than the advantages.
To embark with, there are plethora of reasons why the rental house has disadvantages for the people. The first and foremost is it people lose their freedom when they live in the rental house because there are a lot of rules and regulations. As far as, it is the responsibility of the people to follow these rules. Secondly, in rental house people have no freedom would be a good illustrate for this, in the rental house every person no live in separate room they also joining the room with another's person. Moreover, they shared own things with another person's so, the cannot joy the privacy. Last but not least, which satisfaction and happiness people feel in their home, these not give in the rental house.
On the other hand, the rental house has some benefits. Primarily, people have not tension when they live in rental house because they have not responsibility about the house and they are not much worried about to repair of the house. Moreover, people does not spent more money in the rental house as well as it is control the expenses of the people. To epitomize, if the worker buy their own house it is not beneficial for their because the move one place to another in every one or two years after. And, they invest this money to another place as compared to the buy their own house.
At the end of the day, the rental house has advantages but not more than the disadvantages. Furthermore, those satisfaction people feel in their own house they cannot feel in rental house and one day, every people should in their own house.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 83, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: 'tensioned'.
Suggestion: tensioned
...me benefits. Primarily, people have not tension when they live in rental house because ...
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Line 5, column 261, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[3]
Message: The verb 'does' requires base form of the verb: 'spend'
Suggestion: spend
...of the house. Moreover, people does not spent more money in the rental house as well ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, well, i think, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1632.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 356.0 315.596192385 113% => OK
Chars per words: 4.58426966292 5.12529762239 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34372677135 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48370526013 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.429775280899 0.561755894193 77% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 524.7 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.6167062293 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.0 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.25 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.9375 7.06120827912 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.477774135947 0.244688304435 195% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.174307052917 0.084324248473 207% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0849302494891 0.0667982634062 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.321644067694 0.151304729494 213% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0374382121003 0.056905535591 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.58 12.4159519038 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.95 8.58950901804 81% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 78.4519038076 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.