Some people who have been in prison become good citizens later.some people think that they are the best people to talk to school students about the danger of committing a crime .Do you agree or disagree?
To initiate , the first and prominent point is that prisoners have real experience. Thus they guide students better than anyone. It is scientifically proven that children pay more attention when they listen real stories.Prisoners will tell them about their life that how to live without basic things such as friends, adequate food , clothes and proper water. Subsequently, living in a short room without fan or electricity influence child mind to take away from any kind of crime.
Furthermore, they will also tell about the rigerous punishment of crime.How,such crimes snatched their happiness from their life. Moreover, it is also effective in decreasing crime rates . Students also know about life of a prisoner as a dead life. Hence it gives them a brief picture of criminal life that encourages to restrict themselves from crimes. This will be lucrative for both country and child development with good manners.
In an epilogue, prisoners are authentic teacher in such cases ensure child better future . It also trigger qualities like discipline, sincere, as well huminity.
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- Some people who have been in prison become good citizens later.some people think that they are the best people to talk to school students about the danger of committing a crime .Do you agree or disagree? 56
- Some people who have been in prison become good citizens later.some people think that they are the best people to talk to school students about the danger of committing a crime .Do you agree or disagree? 100
- Nowadays older people who need employment have to compete with younger people What problems does this cause and what are the solutions 74
- Nowadays, older people who need employment have to compete with the young people .What problems does this cause and what are the solutions. 56
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'restricting'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'encourage' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: restricting
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, furthermore, hence, if, moreover, so, then, thus, well, kind of, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 41.998997996 52% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 911.0 1615.20841683 56% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 170.0 315.596192385 54% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.35882352941 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.61087313685 4.20363070211 86% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91127552259 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 121.0 176.041082164 69% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.711764705882 0.561755894193 127% => OK
syllable_count: 279.0 506.74238477 55% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 48.8318078157 49.4020404114 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.8181818182 106.682146367 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.4545454545 20.7667163134 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.72727272727 7.06120827912 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 13.0 5.01903807615 259% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.112429850124 0.244688304435 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0436838833088 0.084324248473 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0305521451081 0.0667982634062 46% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0684727650842 0.151304729494 45% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0338286980686 0.056905535591 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.0946893788 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.51 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.56 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 78.4519038076 57% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.