Some people feel that entertainers (e.g. film stars, pop musicians or sports stars) are paid too much money.
Do you agree or disagree?
Which other types of jobs should be highly paid?
Entertainment is one of the greatest industries which produce a large amount of money. As we all know, people who work in this segment receive great salaries when they appear on the TV. This essay will discuss the reason why I think that this happens and which other professions should be well-paid as well.
The major reason why famous people make a lot of money is popularity. They are role models, so they are continuously photographed and copied by many followers. Moreover, they are always invited to be in advertisements and defend some causes in prol of the least favoured groups, such as poor people, refugees, elderly people, and children, to name a few. Then, they can influence the public to follow their steps and even make buyers use their products.
On the other hand, other professionals who work in some specific areas are not so well-paid as actors, singers, and athletes, for example. However, those experts have a huge impact on society especially in areas related to science and technology. Some doctors, scientists, teachers and others are so well-known until now even after their deaths. Sometimes, people from all around the world have already heard their names and histories. This fact happens because they were able to influence the course of our lives through discoveries, theories and extraordinary intelligence.
To conclude, even though people vinculed on entertainment industry are likely famous and gain a lot of money, I think that other professionals should receive about the same amount of money. Besides, they are as important as the first ones, and they deserve receive awards towards their accomplishments in favor of society.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 258, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to receive'
Suggestion: to receive
...ant as the first ones, and they deserve receive awards towards their accomplishments in...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, first, however, if, moreover, so, then, well, for example, i think, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1401.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 272.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.15073529412 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06108636974 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79436676521 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.599264705882 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 427.5 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.1437746919 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.071428571 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4285714286 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.35714285714 7.06120827912 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.156099476956 0.244688304435 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0523370789941 0.084324248473 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0531851957314 0.0667982634062 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0985552595011 0.151304729494 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.03946421034 0.056905535591 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.59 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.47 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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