you are very disturbed by the noise coming from a restaurant opened near by recently.write a letter to the restaurant manager and say
1.what problem do you experience?
2.what should the management do about it?
3.what needs to be done to fix it?
Dear sir,I am writing this letter to inform you that lot of noise coming from your restaruant which one recently opened and we are facing lot of troubles due to this problem.
Firstly,your restaurant open until 12.00 am and also bar is available in order to that pleathoa of younger people are coming daily by bike and car and they are making lot of noises on the street so that we are unable to sleep properly as a result next day we are unable to go to college.
I am requesting you to reduce the restaurant timings up to 9pm rather than 12.00am on weekdays only but you can continue the same timing on weekend that really help us to study and sleep well.My kind request oyu to take action right away to change the timings.
I hope you take action at the earliest.
yours sincerly,
john.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , I
Dear sir,I am writing this letter to inform you th...
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , your
...troubles due to this problem. Firstly,your restaurant open until 12.00 am and also...
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Line 5, column 193, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: My
... really help us to study and sleep well.My kind request oyu to take action right a...
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Line 9, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Yours
...ope you take action at the earliest. yours sincerly, john.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, really, so, well, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 32.9175257732 67% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 661.0 937.175257732 71% => OK
No of words: 147.0 206.0 71% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.49659863946 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.48200454523 3.78020617076 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.26674588064 2.54303337028 89% => OK
Unique words: 100.0 127.690721649 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.680272108844 0.622605031667 109% => OK
syllable_count: 200.7 290.88556701 69% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 12.6804123711 39% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 16.3608247423 177% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 109.494474746 44.8134815571 244% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 132.2 76.5299724578 173% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.4 16.8248392259 175% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.2 4.34317383033 258% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 7.41237113402 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.143147351641 0.216113520407 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.067115081406 0.0766984524023 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0408157677058 0.0603063233224 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0838938517575 0.12726935374 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0259763920557 0.0580467560999 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 8.37731958763 173% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.96 70.7449484536 83% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.2 7.45979381443 164% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.41 8.71597938144 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.3 7.59969072165 109% => OK
difficult_words: 30.0 41.2886597938 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 17.0 8.62886597938 197% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 8.54432989691 159% => OK
text_standard: 17.0 8.15463917526 208% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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