The number of people who are at risk of serious health problems due to being overweight is increasing. What is the reason for this growth in overweight people in society. How this problem can be solved.
Obesity, a rise trend all over the world, should be taken the highest consideration by governments. It is measured that a high percentage of people, who suffer from their increasing weights, are most likely affected by special diseases and health drawbacks. This essay will discuss, firstly, the reason why this has occurred, and then submit the most viable solution of this worrying trend, followed by a reasoned conclusion.
To commence with, life pace becomes extremely fast, and people rush after it to secure their basic life requirement. Therefore, food quality is not the target of people while selecting it, and the main concentration is to grab the food quickly to continue their daily work. For instance, an undertaken survey by a prestigious university in United Kingdom published that 90% of obesity is due to the fast food products where available and accessible to people with reasonable prices. The cost factor is one of the keys for making people decision.
To tackle the obesity problem requires the commitment of nearly all member of society and government. The government should implement additional taxes on the fast food products to increase its cost, in addition to publish into their media the negative impacts on health from the frequent consumption of such products. Hence, people can minimize their usage and replace it with fresh food. For example, high taxes are applied on some European countries on the fast food products, and it has measured that the obesity rate decreased right after implementing this regulation.
To sum up, although the easiness of getting fast food in many countries, people are alarmed by their government of its detrimental side effects. It is not only government responsibility, but also people understanding of the drawbacks
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 234, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...so people understanding of the drawbacks
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, hence, if, so, then, therefore, while, for example, for instance, in addition, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1506.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 287.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.24738675958 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11595363751 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81835660377 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.606271777003 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 460.8 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 0.809619238477 618% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.5399853473 49.4020404114 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.846153846 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0769230769 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.84615384615 7.06120827912 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.19355088427 0.244688304435 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0657518081511 0.084324248473 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0336219779523 0.0667982634062 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108110430737 0.151304729494 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0305152737946 0.056905535591 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.17 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.57 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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