Some people think that the government should invest money in arts and culture, while others believe the government should spend money on more important things. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
There are more than 500 countries in the world, consisting of both developed and developing countries. Every country has different priorities in terms of development plans for promotion of arts and culture. This essay will discuss whether government should invest money in arts and culture or other important things like infrastructure and healthcare.
There are two main benefits of investing in arts and culture. Firstly, it provides an opportunity to safeguard national heritage. The citizens can connect with the art and feel proud about their culture. Secondly, it promotes tourism and creates employment for all the citizens. For example, United States invested in building, national parks and the Statue of Liberty which became symbol of national pride and also global tourist attractions over time.
On the other hand, the government has other responsibilities such as infrastructure and healthcare, which prove to be directly beneficial for the citizens. Investments in roads, railways will improve mobility and assist trade and commerce. Even though, arts and culture would encourage tourism, basic means of transportation are necessary to assist it. For instance, Europe has one of the best rail connectivity which provides easy access across the continent. Therefore, investment in such projects will not only create jobs but also increase the standard of living.
To summarize, both views are equally important as one spikes national pride, tourism and other helps to improve basic necessities. All the developed countries can invest in arts and culture but developing countries need to focus on other things before construction of museum and places of interest. Personally, I feel that the government should invest in other projects like healthcare and infrastructure as they will immediately impact the people living in the country.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 113, Rule ID: BASIC_FUNDAMENTALS[1]
Message: Use simply 'necessities'.
Suggestion: necessities
...ide, tourism and other helps to improve basic necessities. All the developed countries can inves...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, for example, for instance, i feel, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 10.4138276553 192% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 8.0 24.0651302605 33% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1576.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 283.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.56890459364 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10153676581 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93549203052 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.583038869258 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 483.3 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.1949572355 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.5 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6875 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.8125 7.06120827912 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.242115798255 0.244688304435 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0740135597521 0.084324248473 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0814594446337 0.0667982634062 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.153020015936 0.151304729494 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0794324895055 0.056905535591 140% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.73 12.4159519038 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.94 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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