When he was young, just graduated, after three years working for a Japanese firm, Tony was fired because of a restructured company, closing that business model around the world. He was unemployed for a year. At times helpless, holding a glass of water in his hand wanted to throw it to the ground. Feeling always upset because he couldn't earn money and had nothing new that could make him feel better. He had a befuddled mind. He became very sad when seeing other peoples achievements. He isolated himself and he didn't want to play or talk with anyone. Just staying in the room with his computer.
When he was young, just graduated, after three years working for a Japanese firm, Tony was fired because of a restructured company, closing that business model around the world. He was unemployed for a year. At times helpless, holding a glass of water in his hand wanted to throw it to the ground. Feeling always upset because he couldn't earn money and had nothing new that could make him feel better. He had a befuddled mind. He became very sad when seeing other peoples achievements. He isolated himself and he didn't want to play or talk with anyone. Just staying in the room with his computer.
- None of us can deny the effect of luck in our life. When he was young, just graduated, after three years working for a Japanese firm, Tony was fired because of a restructured company, closing that business model around the world. Becoming unemployed for a 33
- It is the time for a global Blockchain event as worldwide will be happened in Viet Nam with the serious investment of 7 technology pioneer units and attaching over 20 Viet Nam strongest communities in Blockchain field to co-ordinate organize 33
- It is the time for a global Blockchain event as worldwide will be happened in Viet Nam with the serious investment of 7 technology pioneer units and attaching over 20 Viet Nam strongest communities in Blockchain field to co-ordinate organize 33
- It is the time for a global Blockchain event as worldwide will be happened in Viet Nam with the serious investment of 7 technology pioneer units and attaching over 20 Viet Nam strongest communities in Blockchain field to co-ordinate organize 33
- It is the time for a global Blockchain event as worldwide will be happened in Viet Nam with the serious investment of 7 technology pioneer units and attaching over 20 Viet Nam strongest communities in Blockchain field to co-ordinate organize 33
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: couldn't
...ground. Feeling always upset because he couldnt earn money and had nothing new that cou...
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Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...when seeing other peoples achievements. He isolated himself and he didnt want to p...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: didn't
...chievements. He isolated himself and he didnt want to play or talk with anyone. Just ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 19.5258426966 15% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 12.4196629213 8% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 14.8657303371 20% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.3162921348 35% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 33.0505617978 42% => OK
Preposition: 12.0 58.6224719101 20% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 0.0 12.9106741573 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 491.0 2235.4752809 22% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 106.0 442.535393258 24% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.6320754717 5.05705443957 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.2086804361 4.55969084622 70% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.40802695284 2.79657885939 86% => OK
Unique words: 79.0 215.323595506 37% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.745283018868 0.4932671777 151% => OK
syllable_count: 144.9 704.065955056 21% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.59117977528 88% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.99550561798 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 20.2370786517 40% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 13.0 23.0359550562 56% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 46.743816436 60.3974514979 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 61.375 118.986275619 52% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 13.25 23.4991977007 56% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 0.25 5.21951772744 5% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.97078651685 20% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 7.80617977528 38% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 10.2758426966 19% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.613180583806 0.243740707755 252% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.232816802207 0.0831039109588 280% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.270502144935 0.0758088955206 357% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.613180583806 0.150359130593 408% => Maybe some contents are duplicated.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0667264976115 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.0 14.1392134831 50% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 75.2 48.8420337079 154% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 12.1743820225 49% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 8.69 12.1639044944 71% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.56 8.38706741573 90% => OK
difficult_words: 22.0 100.480337079 22% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 11.8971910112 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 11.2143820225 64% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 11.7820224719 59% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 33.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 6
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