Some people say that seeing ancient objects in a museum can give the public a unique awareness of history. Others say that modern media such as films or talks on the internet , provide a more effective way for the public to learn about history.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Some optimistic arguer, and I also disagree that historical pieces are imperative t aware about centuries of their ancestors .while other commentators claim that nowadays, it is easy to find unique objects in the technophile world via World Wide Web. Given both stances would be described in ensuing paragraphs.
Following the first view, some kind of disciples and people are tended to observe actual objects which is easiest way as it more practical .Most of the art galleries have not enough technology which can assist to prevent that things which is unique and have historical importance. Moreover, there are various kind of visitors who may damage the object which may not maintain after the crack or break so it would be harmful for particular culture and tradition. For instance, before a decade Times of India wrote I article that, India has lost their identity in terms of unique objects day by day with the damage issue. Thus it should be keep in a safe compartment to alive a historical authentic signs.
However, nowadays citizens of every country dominated by technology and modern devices so it would be more suitable for everyone .Because of this, they can get vast information by different ways of media namely; video, Wikipedia and websites .what is more, students are tend to grasp images as well as comic films so that they dive deeply into the depth of ancient time to know about their ancestors and their objects. For example, Gujarat Government decided to construct smart classroom with full of technology. In which, schools administrative present some kind of expert talk and presentations. Consequently learners get some informative data and object via images on huge screen.
To draw the curtain, put down my pen and say that nowadays users should get better advantages of technology. Art galleries are important for practical activities however it is useful property for every nation as it would be fast sign of their culture so in my point of view, they should get advantages of it by the assistance of smart apparatus.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, first, however, if, may, moreover, so, then, thus, well, while, for example, for instance, kind of, as well as, what is more
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1710.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 341.0 315.596192385 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.0146627566 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29722995808 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69081039993 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 201.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.589442815249 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 544.5 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 103.549069152 49.4020404114 210% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 142.5 106.682146367 134% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.4166666667 20.7667163134 137% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.0 7.06120827912 170% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 5.01903807615 259% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.167860909828 0.244688304435 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0513483639389 0.084324248473 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0362004495148 0.0667982634062 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0932161107737 0.151304729494 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0328915859838 0.056905535591 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.4 13.0946893788 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.06 50.2224549098 86% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.15 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.