Men and women, because of their inherent physical differences, are not equally suited for many tasks.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim. In developing and supporting your position, be sure to address the most compelling reasons and/or examples that could be used to challenge your position.
Men and women, both are equal in every in almost every aspect. It can be creativity, imagination, intelligence, humor or any other things. But when it comes to physical strength men tend to have more physical power due to inherent physical differences in men and woman. This reflects in many of the day to day task which are done by men which require more power.
While intelligence is great quality some things can only be done with power at a certain times, like lifting a heavy bag of groceries. Some business such as contruction industry requires hard labour. It needs strong people for doing physical task. As we can see, in most of the cases the workers in this industry are mostly men.
Physical strength has been always attributed as a quality which men have rather than woman. It is more of a perception of the world, morphed by years and years of human evolution. We look down in history and we see most of the wars are fought by men. Men died on battlefield to protect their women and children. Thus this is a mentality formed that men are better for physical tasks, while woman are not that prefereble to such tasks. This is evedent from small things like even opening a tight can of bottle. The can is handed over to the man with expectation of opening it.
As the time changes menatality to look towards women is also changing. Today, many women feel that they are equally capable of doing those physical tasks. It can be seen by increasing number of women in every profession, that once were hegemony of men. Serenna Williams a legendary tennis player, claims she can beat a male professional tennis player easily, even though tennis is considered as sport which requires a lot of power and stamina.
It is perceived as women has less physical stregth thus they are unsuitable for cetain tasks. But this is not the case. Women can be as powerful as men and surely not all men are equally powerful. Women can do any task they want be it physical or mental. Men and women both are equal. If women like Kalpana Chawla , coming from indian background can become astrounaut, can go to space then they can surely do any task they want.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, so, then, thus, while, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 26.0 19.5258426966 133% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 12.4196629213 97% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 14.8657303371 81% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.3162921348 80% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 28.0 33.0505617978 85% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 58.6224719101 75% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 12.9106741573 39% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1765.0 2235.4752809 79% => OK
No of words: 385.0 442.535393258 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.58441558442 5.05705443957 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.4296068528 4.55969084622 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.41951298024 2.79657885939 87% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 215.323595506 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.509090909091 0.4932671777 103% => OK
syllable_count: 564.3 704.065955056 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 6.24550561798 144% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.10617977528 193% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.2370786517 124% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 23.0359550562 65% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.8986127866 60.3974514979 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 70.6 118.986275619 59% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 15.4 23.4991977007 66% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.04 5.21951772744 39% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 7.80617977528 115% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 10.2758426966 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.83258426966 186% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.231514438486 0.243740707755 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0733098312744 0.0831039109588 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0560337444528 0.0758088955206 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.139826960246 0.150359130593 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0437208756929 0.0667264976115 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.8 14.1392134831 55% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 48.8420337079 132% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 12.1743820225 66% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.99 12.1639044944 74% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.21 8.38706741573 86% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 100.480337079 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.8971910112 67% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 11.2143820225 71% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.7820224719 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.