Write a letter to the manager of local council who is planning to pull down a historic building in your area due to lack of money to repair it. Expressing how unhappy you are and cover:
Why the building is important
What can be done with it in future
How to raise money for repairing it.
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am Roxie Smith – one of Taleghan city dwellers. I am writing to you to express my dissatisfaction about the news that has been announced recently about the destruction plan of “Jalal Al Ahmad’s” house.
First of all, I should point out not only this historical building commemorates our famous writer but also it has been as a symbol of our town for 100 years. You are no doubt aware of the fact that this writer has always been of great importance for all local people.
I would like to suggest that you use the building to introduce our literature to tourists. It needs to be registered as a historical monument by authorities, and then it could provide itself with financial demand to be maintained. To be more exact, it is potentially like a museum and it would be better if you allocate parts of your budget to it and derive benefits from it later.
To achieve so, it requires some renovation process-particularly repairing its roof. After that, you would be able to do the paper works in order to set certain prices for its entrance tickets. Let me rest you assured that our area residents mostly have great respect for their favourite writer so much that they would spare no effort to prevent it from being destroyed. Some might offer you private investments for running the project. Others could be helpful directly in rebuilding the place.
Your sincere attention and prompt action is deeply appreciated.
Yours faithfully,
Roxie Smith
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 43, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... achieve so, it requires some renovation process-particularly repairing its roof....
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, so, then, well, no doubt, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 7.48453608247 174% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 32.9175257732 128% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 26.3917525773 121% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1253.0 937.175257732 134% => OK
No of words: 255.0 206.0 124% => OK
Chars per words: 4.9137254902 4.54256449028 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99608801488 3.78020617076 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92748709642 2.54303337028 115% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 127.690721649 130% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.650980392157 0.622605031667 105% => OK
syllable_count: 379.8 290.88556701 131% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.4063449226 44.8134815571 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.5 76.5299724578 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2142857143 16.8248392259 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.28571428571 4.34317383033 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.186818795637 0.216113520407 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0567220100235 0.0766984524023 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0253443908097 0.0603063233224 42% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.084081422682 0.12726935374 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.037763485225 0.0580467560999 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 8.37731958763 129% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 70.7449484536 87% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 8.71597938144 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.62 7.59969072165 113% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 41.2886597938 160% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 87.0786516854 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.75 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.