In twenty years there will be fewer cars in use than there are today.
Throughout history, people needs transportation and always try creating new vichles to facilitate transportation.
the conversational question that has caused a heated debate among elites and scholars whether cars in use will increase in next twenty years or there will be fewer. Whether one agree or disagree depend on lens through that is looking. Both adherent and opponent have substantial reasons for option they support. In my perspective, there will be more cars in use than there are today in nest twenty years. In what follows, I am aptly going to delve my paramount reasons to advocate my point view.
First, rate of increasing population is positive and cities and villages will have more population and citizen of world needs more communication and cause increasing transportation.Therefore more transportation needs more car, fuel, roads and ... specific roads and car tax bring more income for government. So it help a car industries increasing their product.
Furthermore, people tends to have easier life. Technology make our life easier and bring equipment more cheaper and accessible. People year on year seek more equipment to make their life easier. So next generations want to move one side to another side easier and some of them prefer their own car.
In winding up this discussion on this moot point, contemplating aforementioned discussions, one could easily surmise that in preceding decades cars in use will increase. Nevertheless, the story is in nutshell, there are many details, worth reasons, which are not mentioned here. A survey in my country indicate that people prefer to move by car than public transportation.it is suggested that improving, constructing a streets must be regarded as government's top priorities.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: The
...vichles to facilitate transportation. the conversational question that has caused...
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Line 4, column 182, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Therefore
...ion and cause increasing transportation.Therefore more transportation needs more car, fue...
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Line 4, column 182, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
...ion and cause increasing transportation.Therefore more transportation needs more car, fue...
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Line 4, column 315, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'helps'?
Suggestion: helps
...bring more income for government. So it help a car industries increasing their prod...
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Line 4, column 336, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... government. So it help a car industries increasing their product. Furthermore...
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Line 6, column 100, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'cheaper' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: cheaper
...ake our life easier and bring equipment more cheaper and accessible. People year on year see...
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Line 8, column 136, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'decades'' or 'decade's'?
Suggestion: decades'; decade's
... could easily surmise that in preceding decades cars in use will increase. Nevertheless...
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Line 8, column 338, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ntry indicate that people prefer to move by car than public transportation.it is ...
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Line 8, column 419, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a street' or simply 'streets'?
Suggestion: a street; streets
... suggested that improving, constructing a streets must be regarded as governments top pri...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, if, look, nevertheless, so, therefore
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 43.0788530466 46% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 52.1666666667 58% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 12.0 8.0752688172 149% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1483.0 1977.66487455 75% => OK
No of words: 276.0 407.700716846 68% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.3731884058 4.8611393121 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07593519647 4.48103885553 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.21690428796 2.67179642975 120% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 212.727598566 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.623188405797 0.524837075471 119% => OK
syllable_count: 452.7 618.680645161 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 9.59856630824 21% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 55.0176108169 48.9658058833 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.6875 100.406767564 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.25 20.6045352989 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.5625 5.45110844103 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.5376344086 163% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.323732040998 0.236089414692 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0950783690362 0.076458572812 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.149879351574 0.0737576698707 203% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.146079524877 0.150856017488 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.146804352261 0.0645574589148 227% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 11.7677419355 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 58.1214874552 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.57 10.9000537634 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.77 8.01818996416 109% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 86.8835125448 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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