Renewable energy resources are the answer for humanity.
Renewable energy are not acfar concept with us. Media indicates that this will have saved humnanity as a cure.
Renewable energy such as wind power, solar energy, bio energy, etc. These energy are all from nature so they can recreate anytime. Also, the emission of engines, devices and machines using these power are safety to thr ecosystem. Reseaches show that renewable energy have been using for a long time since people knew how ro use wind to dry their wet clothes. As we cancsee, prehistoric Egyptian used to transport blocks by water lines to built pyraminds. In manay China periods, people belive that mineral could bring health, money or peace for human.
Each of these natural power got differents benefits. First of all, it is clean. Uaing resources from the Earth will not cause many issues. Secondly, these power are inexhaustibility. We can using it through generations.
But the point is that we used to be using unrenewable energy like electricity, chemical, etc. Changing to using alternative energy cost a huge amount of money cause we have to replace all the nowaday technology.
In my opinion, we should rapidly convert to use green energy. In many developed countries such as America, China, Korean, etc it is a big challange like i have said in the disadvantage. As i thought, the opportunities may give to developing countries.
Thank you for checking my writing!
Best wish for you!
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
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| 2018-08-17 | dalexphilips | 78 | view |
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 69, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this energy' or 'These energies'?
Suggestion: This energy; These energies
...d power, solar energy, bio energy, etc. These energy are all from nature so they can recreat...
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Line 3, column 190, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'use'
Suggestion: use
...hese power are inexhaustibility. We can using it through generations. But the point ...
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Line 5, column 189, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...ike i have said in the disadvantage. As i thought, the opportunities may give to ...
^
Line 7, column 36, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[4]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: ' the Best'.
Suggestion: The Best
.... Thank you for checking my writing! Best wish for you!
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, may, second, secondly, so, such as, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 41.998997996 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 0.0 8.3376753507 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1179.0 1615.20841683 73% => OK
No of words: 236.0 315.596192385 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.99576271186 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91947592106 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69340579729 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.661016949153 0.561755894193 118% => OK
syllable_count: 387.0 506.74238477 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 20.2975951904 59% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.168438147 49.4020404114 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 62.0526315789 106.682146367 58% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 12.4210526316 20.7667163134 60% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 4.47368421053 7.06120827912 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.182333542856 0.244688304435 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.049688718975 0.084324248473 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.062160252363 0.0667982634062 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0828955585477 0.151304729494 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0545249687255 0.056905535591 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.3 13.0946893788 63% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.3 50.2224549098 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 11.3001002004 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.83 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.65 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.8 10.1190380762 67% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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