Some people think that only staff who worked in a company for a long time should be promoted to a higher position.
What is your view on this?
As per the recent media report, an average time spent by an employee in a company is 3 years. It is argued that promotion to a higher rank jobs should only be given to employees who have spent many years in that company. I strongly agree with this viewpoint because it has many benefits to the employees and employer.
To begin with, some people believe that old employees should be prompted because of their loyalty and hard work towards the company, and it will influence other staff member as well. This is to say that when an employee gives many years of his life to the company as a loyalty, the company should reward them with senior positions. Additionally, other counterpart employees would also mimic the similar attributes, so that they could also get promotions and monetary benefits. For instance, the attrition rate in Google is appreciating l approximately 3% because they greatly reward their employees with job promotion after every 3 years of working with the company.
Additionally, promoting old resources to executive level positions is awesome phenomenon because these resources are well aware of the working model, and they can boost company's revenue. This is to say that when an employee spend a long period in same company then he has a good experience of handling the various domains, and they can be greatly productive for the company. Thus, it is pragmatic shift, if companies prompt their resources who has spent more period in the organization. For instance, the chief executive officer (CEO) of almost all companies are those people who have spent between 7 to 15 years with the same brand itself.
To conclude, promoting those resources those who have spent great amount of time with the organization is progressive phenomenon because these resources have shown loyalty and hard work for the company, and with the experience of working culture they can boost the revenue of the company. Even I am promote by my company, this year, because I have completed 5 years with my employer.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 300, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'promoted'.
Suggestion: promoted
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, then, thus, well, for instance, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 24.0651302605 150% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1681.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 339.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.9587020649 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29091512845 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66519459721 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.492625368732 0.561755894193 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 518.4 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 52.2841576015 49.4020404114 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.307692308 106.682146367 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.0769230769 20.7667163134 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.92307692308 7.06120827912 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.244086499443 0.244688304435 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0950318054897 0.084324248473 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0484377779791 0.0667982634062 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.158860766592 0.151304729494 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0264360156493 0.056905535591 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 50.2224549098 107% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.91 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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