The maps below show an island, before and after the construction of some tourist facilities.
This significant feature of two comparable maps present how a hundred metres Island constructed for tourism with a few changes. it is clear and current representation.
Overall, it is evident that the after some construction in Island without causing effect on environment, it has become a amazing place for tourisms.
As we have observed that in first map before construction an island surrounded by sea, had some trees and beach at the west. Moving to another map one can see that there are some facilities which have been played on island. one of the most interesting thing is to know that there are 15 tents.
Following this, The first six around the trees in the west of island while, other in East part. Between the tents the restaurant construct in the north and reception unit surrounded by vehicles track. Another things is the prior, in south-east direction of reception also, there is a beach for swimming which can be found on the western part of island.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 32, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
This significant feature of two comparable maps present how a hundred me...
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Suggestion: It
...tructed for tourism with a few changes. it is clear and current representation. O...
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Line 2, column 120, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
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Suggestion: an
...ng effect on environment, it has become a amazing place for tourisms. As we have...
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...ities which have been played on island. one of the most interesting thing is to kno...
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Line 4, column 172, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
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Suggestion:
...onstruct in the north and reception unit surrounded by vehicles track. Another th...
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Line 4, column 219, Rule ID: AGREEMENT_SENT_START[4]
Message: You should probably use: 'are'.
Suggestion: are
...unded by vehicles track. Another things is the prior, in south-east direction of r...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, so, while, another thing
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 5.60731707317 178% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 25.0 33.7804878049 74% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.97073170732 176% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 804.0 965.302439024 83% => OK
No of words: 166.0 196.424390244 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.84337349398 4.92477711251 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.58944267634 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70634164365 2.65546596893 102% => OK
Unique words: 106.0 106.607317073 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.638554216867 0.547539520022 117% => OK
syllable_count: 238.5 283.868780488 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.3834585553 43.030603864 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.3333333333 112.824112599 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4444444444 22.9334400587 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.55555555556 5.23603664747 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 1.69756097561 353% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.271847163037 0.215688989381 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0974175851325 0.103423049105 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0906618213294 0.0843802449381 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.15692394815 0.15604864568 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0702835707643 0.0819641961636 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 13.2329268293 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 61.2550243902 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.3012195122 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.79 11.4140731707 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.76 8.06136585366 96% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 40.7170731707 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.4329268293 74% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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