Some people believe that computers are more a hindrance than a help in today's world. Others feel that they are such indispensable tools that they would not be able to live or work without them.
• In what ways are computers a hindrance?
• What is your opinion?
In this modern era, requirement of computers is getting more and more. It is because its functions which are needed to ease humanity’s live. However, not a few people concern more to its negative influence. In this essay, I would like to describe several non productive effects of computers. I also will give my though about its indispensable benefits.
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Sentence: Not only because it is debatable but also computers are indispensable in our life.
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Sentence: Those are mere example of application of computers, which is believed there are more.
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Sentence: What is then, it is how we use it.
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we are not in a position to judge computers are bad or not.
we are not in a position to judge whether computers are bad or not.
Sentence: People are in charge to decide whether the use it for good deeds or for bad things.
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Suggestion: Refer to the and use
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