Computers have gained popularity among people of all ages. However, it is argued by some that they are an obstacle, whilst others believe that they have made life to be more bearable. In this essay, I will discuss ways that a computer can become a hindrance.
Though computers have a number of benefits, there are disadvantages associated with them. Firstly, they provide a vast array of entertainment, from video games, movies to various social networking sites. These are addictive in nature and most individuals will spend hours glued on the screen. This means less productivity, less exercise and even less time with family members. Consequently, obesity ensures along with associated diseases such as hypertension, coronary heart diseases and families are destroyed respectively.
On the other hand, computer technology brought about advances in engineering and most machines or menial tasks which could be done manually are now automated. Thus, many have lost their jobs as the computers took over. For instance, my uncle was laid off work from a bakery when a machine which could mix dough automatically was brought in.
In conclusion, despite the numerous advantages of computers, they have drawbacks where some though could be avoided. One can limit the time spent behind the computer and have quality family time and also exercise as well as do the requirements for the day. However, unemployment is inevitable in the wake of automation as they increase productivity.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, first, firstly, however, if, so, thus, well, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1251.0 1615.20841683 77% => OK
No of words: 236.0 315.596192385 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.30084745763 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91947592106 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87909619764 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.669491525424 0.561755894193 119% => OK
syllable_count: 402.3 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.4832674075 49.4020404114 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.3571428571 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8571428571 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.42857142857 7.06120827912 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.191525337771 0.244688304435 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0632223555049 0.084324248473 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0515545274887 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119571977555 0.151304729494 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0695377866759 0.056905535591 122% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 50.2224549098 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.16 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.91 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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