Some people tend to judge a person on the basis of first observation. Some people believe it takes a long time to know a person well. Which approach to knowing people do you think is better and why?
People around the world are not same. There are similarities and differences but no two people are exactly same. Some people judge a person by the saying "First impression is the last impression", while others take a long time to know a person well before building any perceptions. In my opinion, latter is a better approach to knowing people.
The world is very dynamic and so are the people living in it. On certain days we feel happy, on certain others we feel gloomy and for rest of the days we feel a mix of emotions. Some people are introverts while others are extrovert and few others may behave in a certain way under some conditions. When we meet a person for the first time we are seeing only a part of his/ her personality which could just be a mask at that particular instance. There are a lot of unknowns to that personality which can only be explored gradually over a period of time.
Some people take a while to open up to others. They feel comfortable to talk to others over a period of time. So, when we take longer to know a person, we know about their likes and dislikes. Over a period of time it is possible to rationalize a pattern in the behavior of a person, it is possible to assume correctly as to how and why a person is behaving in a certain way and then make a right judgement about a person. Hence, the first impression may just give a glimpse but the actual personality can only be judged over a period of time.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, hence, if, may, so, then, well, while, as to, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 7.48453608247 227% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 32.9175257732 52% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 26.3917525773 148% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1189.0 937.175257732 127% => OK
No of words: 271.0 206.0 132% => OK
Chars per words: 4.38745387454 4.54256449028 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05734859645 3.78020617076 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62383160922 2.54303337028 103% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 127.690721649 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.483394833948 0.622605031667 78% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 396.0 290.88556701 136% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.13402061856 33% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 1.44329896907 277% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.4031176047 44.8134815571 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.9285714286 76.5299724578 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3571428571 16.8248392259 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.07142857143 4.34317383033 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.39031816767 0.216113520407 181% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.137076150514 0.0766984524023 179% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0828208188331 0.0603063233224 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.296648945761 0.12726935374 233% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.098276793507 0.0580467560999 169% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.9 8.37731958763 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 70.7449484536 86% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.18 8.71597938144 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.2 7.59969072165 95% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 41.2886597938 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.